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Funeral Pyre

Everyone cheered as the fire was lit And innocent laughter surrounded the Guy’s pyre; As crackling flames engulfed the stuffed figure sitting on top of it, A hedgehog hibernating below, in the heaped dead leaves and briar, Did not survive the children’s bonfire. Guy – an effigy of Guy Fawkes burnt on 5th November

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/31/2011 11:15:00 PM
Great words here! I loved your write!!
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Date: 8/31/2011 8:06:00 PM
Wish you could have done something for the little guy! Critters have it tough but your verse tells the story well. Nice visit from you Jack. Your comments are appreciated!
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Date: 8/31/2011 7:50:00 PM
sometimes it sucks to be a hedgehog. you took me back to middle school brain cells with this one, jack... very cool. Thanks ~N
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