Fun With 'P'

Along a pebbled path,
A panther pressed his paws,
Paying pure attention to,
The placement of his paws.
Pretending to be placid,
(pausing as to play),
The panther purred with pleasure,
As he pounced upon his prey.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kendrick Avatar
February 14, 2010 at 6:20 AM
Great Alliteration in this slightly humorous write. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
Palli Avatar
February 14, 2010 at 6:12 AM
very clever and amusing
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