Patri Venkata Ramana Poet Verse

Fun of Fall

fun
                                           filled with
                                        musky sweet
                                   smell of piled leaves
                              crackling like child's smile
                             painted floor with rich hues

                               mailed message of alert
                                   to gather produce
                                  chilled breezes hint
                                        the wings to
                                           make a
                                             move


MERSE - Beauty Of Fall Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Malabika Ray Choudhury 
Date: 18-09-2021

Place: 2nd

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Susan Ashley October 26, 2021 at 8:51 PM A beautiful depiction of Fall, Patri. Your lovely and lively imagery stirs the senses. Congratulations for your excellent win in Mala’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Patri Venkata Ramana October 27, 2021 at 1:03 AM Thanks a lot for your compliments.

Eve Roper September 26, 2021 at 11:02 AM Great cool brisk feeling and imagery , Patri, congratulations on your win in Malabika's contest! Hugs Eve Patri Venkata Ramana October 27, 2021 at 1:03 AM Thank you so much for the best compliments.

Malabika Ray Choudhury September 26, 2021 at 6:13 AM Congratulations on your win. Beautiful Merse - enjoyed ~ Mala Patri Venkata Ramana September 26, 2021 at 7:21 AM Glad to receive compliments. Thank you so much for liking my poem.