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Fun of Fall

fun filled with musky sweet smell of piled leaves crackling like child's smile painted floor with rich hues mailed message of alert to gather produce chilled breezes hint the wings to make a move MERSE - Beauty Of Fall Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 18-09-2021 Place: 2nd

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Date: 10/26/2021 8:51:00 PM
A beautiful depiction of Fall, Patri. Your lovely and lively imagery stirs the senses. Congratulations for your excellent win in Mala’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 10/27/2021 1:03:00 AM
Thanks a lot for your compliments.
Date: 9/26/2021 11:02:00 AM
Great cool brisk feeling and imagery , Patri, congratulations on your win in Malabika's contest! Hugs Eve
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Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 10/27/2021 1:03:00 AM
Thank you so much for the best compliments.
Date: 9/26/2021 6:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Beautiful Merse - enjoyed ~ Mala
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Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 9/26/2021 7:21:00 AM
Glad to receive compliments. Thank you so much for liking my poem.

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