Notes About The Poem

10/22/2025

Here’s a fun Poetry Marathon rhyme inspired by Alfred, Lord Tennyson, (1809-1892) and his famous poem, "The Charge of the Light Brigade.”  I originally published this in my 'Mile 21 Closed and Being Judged' blog post on 10/11/2025.

 

Each of my Marathon tribute poems is a transformative homage to a literary classic — much like a parody or pastiche. I always credit the original poet and work, and the new poem stands as a creative reinterpretation with its own theme, imagery, and tone. 

 

I have included my Marathon-themed poetry in my Poetry Marathon blog posts since 2019, usually at the end of the blog posts, but I never posted them to my poetry page. So now I'm taking the time to post them to my poetry page. 


Fun Marathon Poetry Inspired by Alfred, Lord Tennyson

Half the course, half the course,
Half the course finished
Each one all in, to the end
Run the relentless
Forward the runners bold!
Charge the vic’try arch—their goal
Each one all in, to the end
Run the relentless

Challenges to the right of them,
Challenges to the left of them,
Challenges in front of them
Still they are fearless
No need to ask them why
They’ll give you no reply
Spirit you can’t deny
Each one all in, to the end
Run the relentless
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Dietrich Avatar
October 23, 2025 at 10:11 AM
Great poem that feels like being in a running race. Not poetry race. Haha! I love that this is inspired by a classic poet.
Toney Avatar
October 23, 2025 at 11:11 AM
Andrea, thank you for your kind encouragement and for your support of my Poetry Marathon. Just a few more miles to go ...
Goldsmith Avatar
October 22, 2025 at 1:33 PM
I enjoyed reading your fun write. Love you line, "Each one all in, to the end." That is how one will win... Have a wonderful day writing away..............
Toney Avatar
October 22, 2025 at 3:58 PM
Awesome comment, Paula.
Toney Avatar
October 22, 2025 at 1:17 PM
Each of my Marathon tribute poems is a transformative homage to a literary classic — much like a parody or pastiche. I always credit the original poet and work, and the new poem stands as a creative reinterpretation with its own theme, imagery, and tone.
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