Paulette Calasibetta Poet Rhyme

Fun Is What Ever We Make It

Fun is being care free.
                           Joining others together in activities
                                        Filled with glee.

                                        Adventures high
                                  in varied joint festivities
                                            We try!

                                           Each ones
                                           Proclivities
                                              Done!

                                 Fun is being care free.
                               In varied joint festivities
                                             Glee!



Date: March 10, 2022
For: “Let’s Minichu on Fun” Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Mohan Chutani 
Syllable count verified on Poetry Soup counter
Placed 4th in contest

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Caren Krutsinger March 12, 2022 at 5:12 AM This poem has a gleeful side that brought me joy. I think carefree is always one word but I like the way you separated it, probably for emphasis. Paulette Calasibetta March 12, 2022 at 5:53 AM It’s time we all enjoyed a little fun with carefree or Care Free~ felt a bit of a dichotomy there….don’t you think? :)Paulette

Mystic Rose Rose March 11, 2022 at 1:00 PM fun is being carefree and hanging out with friends who share a like mind, glad we hang out, your fun ! Paulette Calasibetta March 11, 2022 at 2:28 PM The feeling is mutual! :)Paulette

Joanna Daniel March 11, 2022 at 5:49 AM This is really nice, Paulette:) p.s. kindly check the form once again... Paulette Calasibetta March 11, 2022 at 8:45 AM Just made the adjustment....can't thank you enough. :)Paulette Paulette Calasibetta March 11, 2022 at 8:38 AM Thank Jo~thought I had it right but will revisit it. I appreciate your input. :)Paulette

Darlene De Beaulieu March 10, 2022 at 2:52 PM Hello Paulette Yes fun is what we make of it. Hugs. Darlene De Beaulieu March 11, 2022 at 10:37 AM Hello Paulette, you are welcome . Hugs. Paulette Calasibetta March 11, 2022 at 8:45 AM Thanks Darlene~it was a "fun" write. :)Paulette

David Kavanagh March 10, 2022 at 1:12 PM Too right Paulette, it’s the carefree nature that puts the absolute paradigm in fun, Haven’t tried this form before, you sure make it look like fun, but I’m sensing it’s not easy, all the best in contest, cheers David Paulette Calasibetta March 11, 2022 at 8:46 AM Thanks for stopping by to visit~it is a new form for me~quite fun to write. Try it! :)Paulette