Fun Fete

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I got to dance with Cinderella 
And boogie with Snow White 
Under the stardust of Capella
And the fairies of night 

All those pixies beckon me to play 
Hide and seek with elves nice 
The smartest smurfs would like me to stay 
In their small paradise 

Barbie tells me my prince is waiting 
At the end of rainbow 
And Belle wants me participating 
With the Beast in her show

Tinker Bell sprinkles some pixie dust 
And I float in the sky 
All it takes is some magic and trust 
To pass Peter Pan by 

Ariel welcomes me to party
With little mermaid friends 
I join them for a dinner hearty
That's how my fun fete ends


12.07.2020


116 words

For Caren Krutsinger's "Fun with Fictional beings" contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 1/4/2021 8:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Love your line, "Tinker Bell sprinkles some pixie dust ." Can I get a bag of pixie dust to go???? Enjoy your win. Today, have joy/blessings...................
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Date: 1/3/2021 1:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Jo, love this fairytale fun fete poem/story... Belle
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Date: 1/3/2021 10:18:00 AM
Congratulations on you awesome win, Jo, great creative Disney poem. Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/3/2021 12:41:00 AM
Congrats on your win. God B L E S S you always
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Date: 12/11/2020 11:56:00 AM
what an adorable poem Jo:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/8/2020 11:46:00 AM
Oh I love your imagination in this one..
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Date: 12/7/2020 2:35:00 PM
this is adorable, JO
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Date: 12/7/2020 7:27:00 AM
Such a fun poem you have written! Well done Jo :)
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Date: 12/7/2020 6:39:00 AM
A great poem. You use fictional personages well. ~~
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Date: 12/7/2020 5:49:00 AM
Dwelling wonderfully in creativity, your poem sprinkles magic--superbly written words of fun, Jo.
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Date: 12/7/2020 5:17:00 AM
You make me want to be a child again Jo, well done, have a blessed day .
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Date: 12/7/2020 4:13:00 AM
This is amazing and awesome at the same time. I love it. You're given a sure winner to the contest. Perfect! God bless you sweet lady
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Date: 12/7/2020 2:21:00 AM
Hi Jo, You have penned a well written magical write. When I was a little girl I dreamed of being a princess or hanging out with other princesses. Reading this write caused my inner child to go back down memory lane, to a land of castles, fairies, and princesses. Best wishes in the contest. I enjoyed the read. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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