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Fun At the Beach

covered in white sand

    youngsters are engaged in play.

            sand slip-on sandals.

Copyright © Sotto Poet | Year Posted 2021

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Caren Krutsinger

July 9, 2021 at 4:12 AM

I remember those days of slipping and sliding out of thongs, and having sand in between my toes. I had forgotten it, so thank you!

July 9, 2021 at 5:53 AM

Thank you so much for your supporting feedback Caren

Paula Goldsmith

June 30, 2021 at 8:14 AM

A wonderful Haiku write and picture. Wish I was on the beach with the kids. I love the ocean. Don't get sunburned. Have a blessed day...............

June 30, 2021 at 5:40 AM

Lovely summer frolic in your words, Lasaad.

June 30, 2021 at 6:57 AM

Thank you for your lovely feedback, Vijay

Demetrios Trifiatis

June 30, 2021 at 5:00 AM

Dreamy moments that with delight they will later recall, my friend, Lasaad! Tender Haiku!

June 30, 2021 at 6:58 AM

Thanks dearest Friend Demetrios, for reading and commenting. Have a blessed day

Victor Buhagiar

June 30, 2021 at 12:54 AM

That's fun.

June 30, 2021 at 6:59 AM

Sure is, Victor but we need to move the clock many years backwards

Mahtab Bangalee

June 29, 2021 at 11:09 PM

lovely that is

June 30, 2021 at 7:00 AM

Thanks for your feedback Mahtab

June 29, 2021 at 7:30 PM

A delightful haiku, Lasaad! Blessings, Kim M

June 30, 2021 at 7:00 AM

Thank you so much Dear Kim, for your genus words. Blessings and kindest regards

L Milton Hankins

June 29, 2021 at 7:25 PM

a lovely, warm picture of children playing in the sand, wonderfully expressed in the haiku form. Nice job!

June 30, 2021 at 7:03 AM

Thanks dear friend, so much appreciate your feedback, kindest regards

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