Malabika Ray Choudhury Poet Rhyme

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September 6, 2024

Nursery Rhyme 7 Poetry Contest

Sponsor: Eve Roper

 

Fun And Learn - Nursery Rhyme

Up goes sun,
So much fun!

Ladybug and bee,
We want to see!

Butterfly kiss,
Never miss!

Mud and clay,
Perfect for play!

Swings and Slides,
Bikes for rides!

Teacher sings,
It is Spring!

Birds fly,
So very high!

Children dance,
Leap and prance!

Blue is sky,
We say hi!

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Paula Goldsmith September 30, 2024 at 2:16 PM Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your fun Nursery Rhyme write again. The kids will love it.... Have a great day with your win..................

Ink Empress September 9, 2024 at 2:17 PM This is so cute, sounded a bit like a footle, so catchy how youv rhymed! I especially love butterfly kiss never miss and also the ending. The whole rhyme has a captivating cadence to it which truly make’s your poem stand out dear mala! You are very good at these, i am sure will do well! Best wishes! Sending you light always Malabika Ray Choudhury September 9, 2024 at 5:06 PM Thank you, Dear Empress. I wrote one...and then thought nursery rhymes are supposed to be recited by little children, it should not have any verbosity at all - it should be funny, and almost like a jingle. So I wrote a second one. I really appreciate your detailed comments, Dear Poet. Love ~ Mala

Paula Goldsmith September 7, 2024 at 8:18 AM I enjoyed reading your fun Nursery Rhyme write. Kids will love this one. "Good Luck" We both did this contest. Have a blessed/fun day with your win...................... Malabika Ray Choudhury September 7, 2024 at 8:50 AM I wrote this one exclusively for little kids under 6. Thank you for commenting. Love ~ Mala