Fun

FUN Pleasure Amusement Beach days and dancing Disneyland and cruises Happy meals; friends at your side “Laughter often comes with the ride.” Sept. 14, 2020 for Joseph May's Pyramid Poetry Contest

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Paul Callus

Date: 9/22/2020 1:02:00 PM

An enjoyable, fun-packed Pyramid, Andrea. I love the ending! Congratulations on yet another fine win. Regards // paul

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/22/2020 11:24:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Your fun write and fun day sound great. Can I come and play with you?????? Enjoy your fun win..........

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 9/21/2020 6:49:00 AM

Congratulations Andrea on your winning poem. beautifully presented. Blessings, Jennifer

Carol Mitra

Date: 9/20/2020 11:11:00 PM

Wow...Joy and laughter coming along with fun....awesome read Andrea...virtual hug:)

Jcb Brul

Date: 9/20/2020 6:14:00 PM

Such a spectacular piece Ms Andrea! I wish I could covid will end soon so we can have lots of fun again!...Congratulations on your splendid win!!A FAVE>>>

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/20/2020 12:34:00 PM

- Fun to see this at the top of the winner list, Andrea:) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paghunda Zahid

Date: 9/20/2020 11:57:00 AM

Congrats on your win Andrea. Hugs!

Joseph May

Date: 9/20/2020 11:38:00 AM

Lovely write Andre, Congrats on your win

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 9/20/2020 10:48:00 AM

Yes! a win for fun. Congrats Andrea.

Michael Tor

Date: 9/19/2020 6:36:00 PM

We need more of this Andrea. Uplifting piece my Dear. We need this and lots of it... Hope you win. I have been away a little bit and you have written so much. Im trying to catch up to your writings.

Paghunda Zahid

Date: 9/18/2020 1:09:00 PM

Awesome... Beautifully penned. Good luck for the contest.

V. Deepa

Date: 9/16/2020 1:06:00 PM

“Laughter often comes with the ride.”...true words dear Andrea mam:-) clearly shows your enjoyment at weekend 's..We must celebrate regularly to boost our self-esteem.. Have a beautiful day..Take care.Much love:-)