Andrea Dietrich Poet Verse

Fun

FUN
Pleasure
Amusement

Beach days and dancing
Disneyland and cruises
Happy meals; friends at your side

“Laughter often comes with the ride.”

Sept. 14, 2020 for Joseph May's Pyramid Poetry Contest

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Paul Callus September 22, 2020 at 1:02 PM An enjoyable, fun-packed Pyramid, Andrea. I love the ending! Congratulations on yet another fine win. Regards // paul

Paula Goldsmith September 22, 2020 at 11:24 AM Congratulations on your win. Your fun write and fun day sound great. Can I come and play with you?????? Enjoy your fun win..........

Jennifer Proxenos September 21, 2020 at 6:49 AM Congratulations Andrea on your winning poem. beautifully presented. Blessings, Jennifer

Carol Mitra September 20, 2020 at 11:11 PM Wow...Joy and laughter coming along with fun....awesome read Andrea...virtual hug:)

JC Brul September 20, 2020 at 6:14 PM Such a spectacular piece Ms Andrea! I wish I could covid will end soon so we can have lots of fun again!...Congratulations on your splendid win!!A FAVE>>>

Anne-Lise Andresen September 20, 2020 at 12:34 PM - Fun to see this at the top of the winner list, Andrea:) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paghunda Zahid September 20, 2020 at 11:57 AM Congrats on your win Andrea. Hugs!

Joseph May September 20, 2020 at 11:38 AM Lovely write Andre, Congrats on your win

Jeanne Mcgee September 20, 2020 at 10:48 AM Yes! a win for fun. Congrats Andrea.

Michael Tor September 19, 2020 at 6:36 PM We need more of this Andrea. Uplifting piece my Dear. We need this and lots of it... Hope you win. I have been away a little bit and you have written so much. Im trying to catch up to your writings.

Paghunda Zahid September 18, 2020 at 1:09 PM Awesome... Beautifully penned. Good luck for the contest.

V. Deepa September 16, 2020 at 1:06 PM “Laughter often comes with the ride.”...true words dear Andrea mam:-) clearly shows your enjoyment at weekend 's..We must celebrate regularly to boost our self-esteem.. Have a beautiful day..Take care.Much love:-)

Joanna Daniel September 15, 2020 at 9:51 PM Ah! Beautiful, I see a winner here, Andrea:)

Panagiota Romios September 15, 2020 at 3:20 PM Great pen, Andrea Pangie xx

Jeanne Mcgee September 15, 2020 at 8:55 AM I have to agree totally. this is very cute. Good luck in the contest!

John Lawless September 15, 2020 at 6:03 AM Now there's a pyramid that make its point. Nicely done andrea

Daniel Turner September 14, 2020 at 9:00 PM Even in a hearse because you get the last laugh. Fun stuff, Andrea. I hope you and yours are well!

John Watt September 14, 2020 at 4:39 PM Loads of fun here, Andrea! I like the beach days the best. GL to you.

Kim Rodrigues September 14, 2020 at 4:37 PM We were supposed to take that ride in December but cancelled. Have to wait until next September. Here’s hoping!

Sam Kauffman September 14, 2020 at 4:05 PM Layer upon layer of "fun" my friend! It just keeps building! Well done! Best wishes for the contest.

Vijay Pandit September 14, 2020 at 3:36 PM Life is wonderful amid friends and amusement--your poem evokes fun, Andrea.

Jan Allison September 14, 2020 at 2:15 PM perfect fun Andrea:-) hugs jan xx