Fulton-Eruptions

F   O   R   E   S   T  
F   U   N   G   A   L
F   O   R   A   Y   S
L   I   T   T   E    R
A   U   T   U   M   N
L   E   A   V   E   S
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Dawood Avatar
October 14, 2008 at 1:39 AM
I like it, I wanted to look up the poem and try to create a shape poem for your contest, but I don't really know if I could do this. Well done Peace Fasthima
Winter Avatar
October 13, 2008 at 7:05 AM
I know what it is you write of. Excellent. Although this doesn't make it sound very appetizing I am still hungry from your last poem. : ) Aside from that, makes me long to walk through a forest, so rich and deep in nature's mystery. Love, Shar
Torres Avatar
October 13, 2008 at 1:58 AM
..Raking leaves..
Torres Avatar
October 13, 2008 at 1:57 AM
You like these types of poems Brian and you have a special talent to find those crucial words that fit in just right. Another excellent write. It brings memories to me when I was a boy racking leaves. I earned two dollars to do a shole yard. It was a lot of money back then 1968. Then I go to the store and get my cheeses and soda those were great innocent days no worries or heartfelt situations. blesings Michael
Anymore Avatar
October 13, 2008 at 1:37 AM
It doesn't look like eruption. It looks like a square. It is fun saying those three times fast though.
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