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I roam the alley of bruised dreams The hanging lamps fade, so unkind-- My soul trapped as night blasphemes Of farewell’s plight nailing this mind. He’s gone far off to taint our love--- In anguish, I search heaven's dove; Yet blackbirds howl from skies above. Titles Of Novels, nette on claud Contest 10th June 2016 quatrain and tercet in a.a.a combined " A Farewell To Arms"

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Date: 6/14/2016 8:04:00 PM
Wow! Well deserved win Amelie, congratulations...
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Date: 6/14/2016 4:07:00 PM
Dark and beautiful. Excellent take on this title theme. Congratulations, Amelie, on placing first! ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 6/14/2016 2:46:00 PM
very nicely done, Amelie. Congrats on the top spot.
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Date: 6/14/2016 8:39:00 AM
Lovely poem Amelie,congratulations on the top spot!
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Date: 6/14/2016 6:00:00 AM
Congrats on first place Amelie...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 6/14/2016 4:40:00 AM
Hi Amelie. Congrats for your well, deserved first placement with this splendid piece!! ;-)
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Date: 6/14/2016 3:00:00 AM
though dark in its mood, the flow and imagery make this poem a pure delight, amelie... thanks for being part of my contest and big congrats!..huggs
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Date: 6/10/2016 9:30:00 AM
Deep dark imagery Amelie - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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