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I roam the alley of bruised dreams
The hanging lamps fade, so unkind--
My soul trapped as night blasphemes
Of farewell’s plight nailing this mind.
He’s gone far off to taint our love---
In anguish, I search heaven's dove;
Yet blackbirds howl from skies above.




Titles Of Novels, nette on claud Contest
10th June 2016
quatrain and tercet in a.a.a combined
" A Farewell To Arms"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Smith Avatar
June 14, 2016 at 8:04 PM
Wow! Well deserved win Amelie, congratulations...
Callus Avatar
June 14, 2016 at 4:07 PM
Dark and beautiful. Excellent take on this title theme. Congratulations, Amelie, on placing first! ~ Regards // paul
Dietrich Avatar
June 14, 2016 at 2:46 PM
very nicely done, Amelie. Congrats on the top spot.
Chansarkar Avatar
June 14, 2016 at 8:39 AM
Lovely poem Amelie,congratulations on the top spot!
Warrior Avatar
June 14, 2016 at 6:00 AM
Congrats on first place Amelie...god bless...^WW^
Kimathi Avatar
June 14, 2016 at 4:40 AM
Hi Amelie. Congrats for your well, deserved first placement with this splendid piece!! ;-)
Onclaud Avatar
June 14, 2016 at 3:00 AM
though dark in its mood, the flow and imagery make this poem a pure delight, amelie... thanks for being part of my contest and big congrats!..huggs
Allison Avatar
June 10, 2016 at 9:30 AM
Deep dark imagery Amelie - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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