Fullness

single rose leaf falls sacrifice to morning wind flora flourish

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Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/5/2023 2:25:00 PM

The cycle of flowers...One falls and others flourish..Can picture this..lovely.

Arlo Parker
Date: 9/5/2023 6:28:00 PM

Exactly my intent...thanks for picking it up so clearly, CC. :o]]

Susan Ashley

Date: 7/27/2023 9:32:00 AM

Dear Arlo, I love the tender spirit and imagery of your haiku. Heart and soul propels forward. Perfect title too! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Arlo Parker
Date: 7/27/2023 10:02:00 AM

Nature tells us just what we need to know. Bless. :o)

Jan Allison

Date: 7/26/2023 11:41:00 AM

lovely Lines AP:-) xx

Arlo Parker
Date: 7/26/2023 3:42:00 PM

Wonderful how a leaf dying can propel a plant to fulfillment. Thx 4 stopping in. :o))