Full Tilt

        Dry mouth,
   shallow breathing;
In your dessert mirage
I thought I saw a waterfall;
            Dizzy,
I’m completely decimated;
   It is too hot to care;
   Please wet my lips,
          full tilt.
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Rodrigues Avatar
July 19, 2024 at 3:19 PM
Very well done, Melani! Love the last words.
Udaeta Avatar
July 19, 2024 at 4:13 PM
Thank you!! Blessings..
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