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Dry mouth, shallow breathing; In your dessert mirage I thought I saw a waterfall; Dizzy, I’m completely decimated; It is too hot to care; Please wet my lips, full tilt.

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Date: 7/19/2024 3:19:00 PM
Very well done, Melani! Love the last words.
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Melani Udaeta
Date: 7/19/2024 4:13:00 PM
Thank you!! Blessings..

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