Full Silver Moon Shines

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                                        Full silver moon shines
                                         Cold rocky precipice..
                                             Awaits dawn


Contest:"Pseudo-Haiku-Cuckoo-cuckhosis~!
Sponsor:Chris D. Aechtner
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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July 7, 2011 at 4:06 AM
Nicely done. I can see myself standing on a cliff watching the silver moon. Good job. God Bless, JB
Onclaud Avatar
June 30, 2011 at 12:07 AM
a sweet delicacy, sara.. bound to win; i lke this lots! :) huggs, nette
Foulk Avatar
June 29, 2011 at 11:09 AM
a beautiully creative piece of well written Haiku. thank you for commenting on Wishing Star.
Long Avatar
June 29, 2011 at 6:36 AM
this was beautifully written good luck in the contest. cory
Sweetheart Avatar
June 29, 2011 at 4:37 AM
magnificent view in this lovely Haiku Sara..good luck in the contest.. awesome as u luv..
Dietrich Avatar
June 28, 2011 at 10:45 PM
Coolio, Sara!! I like the imagery! Hope I get to be on here able to type again very soon.
Culverhouse Avatar
June 28, 2011 at 6:39 PM
funny title on the contest.
Mehta Avatar
June 28, 2011 at 5:39 PM
Nice visual, sara
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