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Full Moonlight

Shrouded longings.
Moonlight
conflicting
love and tears

A life melody
fetoplacental
Sung by ghost
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Written: July 5th, 2021

Picture This 2 - 7 Lines Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Joseph May

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Jan Allison July 18, 2021 at 4:44 PM excellent ink, many congrats on your win Lasaad:-) hugs Jan xx Sotto Poet July 19, 2021 at 3:28 AM Thanks Jan, appreciate your comment:) // best wishes for a nice week

Joseph May July 14, 2021 at 6:36 AM Very nicely penned Lasaad, Congrats on your win Sotto Poet July 14, 2021 at 8:06 AM Thank you so much, Joseph, for reading and placing my poem. I appreciate it, blessings and kindest regards.

Mystic Rose Rose July 13, 2021 at 10:18 AM Beautiful expressions congrats :)

Christuraj Alex July 12, 2021 at 7:27 PM Beautiful Work. Congratulations!

Rama Balasubramanian July 12, 2021 at 7:08 PM Congratulations

Caren Krutsinger July 9, 2021 at 4:02 AM This is resoundingly wonderful, mystical.

Rama Balasubramanian July 8, 2021 at 9:37 AM phenomenal write. Very imaginative. All the best for contest Sotto Poet July 8, 2021 at 11:13 AM Thank you so much for your gracious visit and delightful comment Rama, have a wonderful evening and blessings

Anne-Lise Andresen July 7, 2021 at 8:05 AM - Yes, I must admit it looks a bit ghostly ... beautifully written - Best wishes in the contest, Las :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Sotto Poet July 8, 2021 at 11:12 AM Thank you so much Dear Ann-Lise for your uplifting comment and kind words// stay safe and warm hugs

David Kavanagh July 6, 2021 at 10:51 AM You are certainly exploring the medium of life here, using fantastic imagery and exquisite wording Lasaad, I really hope this one comes out tops in the contest, cheers David Sotto Poet July 6, 2021 at 11:17 AM You struck the nail on the head, dear buddy David; that's what this little poem was about; thank you for your very nice and encouraging comments. Have a wonderful remainder of your day, and be blessed.

Demetrios Trifiatis July 6, 2021 at 8:28 AM Enchanting writing leaving one spellbound, my friend, Lasaad! Blessings. Sotto Poet July 6, 2021 at 11:14 AM Appreciate your precious visit and immaculate comment, dear friend Demetrios, all my best wishes and blessings

Victor Buhagiar July 5, 2021 at 10:43 PM I suppose every poet interprets his poem in his own way. I look at this verse as the beginning of life. I found it incredibly beautiful. Sotto Poet July 6, 2021 at 6:34 AM Thank you so much Victor, you said exactly what I meant by this poem, much appreciated, my friend, blessings and kindest wishes

Delice Arleen Skelly July 5, 2021 at 10:05 PM There is a fragility about this write, it speaks to me of a life that never was? Sotto Poet July 6, 2021 at 6:38 AM Thank you so much Arleen, it’s the fragility between life and the afterlife, appreciate your profound interpretation. Blessings and hugs

Joanna Daniel July 5, 2021 at 9:45 PM Deep and dark, Lasaad:) Sotto Poet July 6, 2021 at 6:39 AM Thanks Jo appreciate your comment

Evelyn Judy Buehler July 5, 2021 at 8:41 PM There's hauntingly imagery in this darkly beautiful verse, Lasaad. I think there was a bit of confusion between Joseph May's contest and Charles Messina's, which I entered. You did a marvelous job on this poem. Good luck! :D Sotto Poet July 5, 2021 at 9:01 PM Thank you so much, Evelyn, I'm so sorry for the confusion between the two contests but yours is great, have a wonderful evening, Check Soupmail please.

L Milton Hankins July 5, 2021 at 4:32 PM I chose this one, too, Lasaad, but it is not so full of imagery as your's. Good writing. Sotto Poet July 5, 2021 at 4:52 PM Thanks for the compliment, Milton, I read and commented on yours, and it's way better, with great imagery and great wording, my friend.

Vijay Pandit July 5, 2021 at 3:39 PM Nicely done Lasaad--great imagery in just a few words. Sotto Poet July 5, 2021 at 3:45 PM Thank you so much dear Vijay, your appreciation means a lot to me. Blessings and kindest regards

Andrea Dietrich July 5, 2021 at 2:16 PM beautiful. Seems a new contest I need to explore! Sotto Poet July 5, 2021 at 3:04 PM Thanks, Andrea; yes, it's the new Elemental-haiku contest.