Placed First in : 1403 Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand
Full Moon Hiku 48 full moon mounts high silver light dances on waves~ dreams softly unfurl. l m o h l . . . o g u . . . . n i f . . . s h m . . . t o u n \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ a c s o-n w ~a ~v ~e ~s~ s-I-v-e-r l-i-g-h-t d n e ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ d-r-e-a-m-s s-o-f-t-l-y u ~n ~f ~u ~r ~l.
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