Full Moon

full moon
outside the dogs bark 
at nothing
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Dutta Avatar
February 28, 2018 at 11:34 PM
This is a new form of haiku poem.I was ignorant, but I admire.
Andresen Avatar
February 28, 2018 at 2:37 PM
- I'm not so familiar with this kind of haiku poems Deborah ....I use old fashioned style in my Haiku poems, but interesting to learn modern style - I like it :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)
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February 28, 2018 at 5:49 PM
I have a new blog posted on Poetry Soup that helps with understanding Modern Haiku. I plan to post another blog soon with resources for understanding Modern Haiku.
Callus Avatar
February 28, 2018 at 9:15 AM
A pleasing haiku to which I can relate, especially in hot summer nights when I keep the windows open. ~ Regards // paul
Krutsinger Avatar
February 28, 2018 at 9:04 AM
I can so relate to this! Nice job.
Sietesantos Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 10:22 AM
Excellent haiku - written in the style of the masters! Love it! Pandita
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February 27, 2018 at 10:37 AM
Wow! Thank you for the compliment. I admire the Masters, but feel I fall far short of that quality.
Gauthier Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 8:44 AM
LOL one can sense the tone o annoyance in the last line. Well done, Deborah.
Beachboard Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 10:35 AM
Thank you. It was rather annoying because I had to be up early this morning!
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