Full Moon

Moonball's sunken eyes snowy mountain silhouettes strange birds flew backwards

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Poetiq1der Simmons

Date: 6/22/2011 12:11:00 AM

Peace and God's Blessings to you and yours.... An on point account of the Full moon. I gathered the "Strange birds flew backwards" part is about how people's sense of perception , judgement, and equilibrium are impaired by the fullness of the moon. I enjoyed it immensely. Be Faithful and Blessed/Uno

Wilma Neels

Date: 5/2/2011 9:21:00 PM

An awesome image painted Mary, this made me smile this morning.. ;) Wilma

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/20/2011 2:08:00 PM

This creates a most unusual ,hence interesting image, Mary!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/19/2011 6:57:00 PM

I was just staring at the awesome full moon tonight, Mary, and very much enjoyed your interpretation. The craters do seem to form "sunkeneyes" and "mountain silhouettes." Love, Carolyn