Full Moon

Moonball's sunken eyes
snowy mountain silhouettes
strange birds flew backwards

mysteryhaiku

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Poetiq1der Simmons

June 22, 2011 at 12:11 AM

Peace and God's Blessings to you and yours.... An on point account of the Full moon. I gathered the "Strange birds flew backwards" part is about how people's sense of perception , judgement, and equilibrium are impaired by the fullness of the moon. I enjoyed it immensely. Be Faithful and Blessed/Uno

Wilma Neels

May 2, 2011 at 9:21 PM

An awesome image painted Mary, this made me smile this morning.. ;) Wilma

Andrea Dietrich

March 20, 2011 at 2:08 PM

This creates a most unusual ,hence interesting image, Mary!

Carolyn Devonshire

March 19, 2011 at 6:57 PM

I was just staring at the awesome full moon tonight, Mary, and very much enjoyed your interpretation. The craters do seem to form "sunkeneyes" and "mountain silhouettes." Love, Carolyn

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