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Emptied bottle, drunk
really feeling lighter 
than bottle should have
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Lamoureux Avatar
April 9, 2014 at 5:50 PM
You may not feel as light in the morning.
Sangwai Avatar
April 10, 2014 at 10:22 PM
Ha Ha ! really. :)
Assandoh-Mensah Avatar
April 9, 2014 at 5:40 AM
Short but the message is clear. but what did i learn from it? i don't know. may be it's because it's narrative.
Sangwai Avatar
April 10, 2014 at 10:21 PM
It was just a play with words. Thanks stopping by and communicating.
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