Full Fledged

A fledgling struggled in the wet grass
                         he had failed in his first attempt
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                 ...The cat wouldn’t
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Summers Avatar
August 15, 2024 at 7:36 PM
I like this a lot, reminded me of the cat from the Charles Bukowski poem The Mockingbird. John
Greenhough Avatar
August 15, 2024 at 7:04 PM
This is scary. Too bad for the bird.
Wolf Avatar
August 15, 2024 at 6:57 PM
Yup. Whoever heard of a 'fledgling cat,' anyway?!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 15, 2024 at 6:12 PM
Predators!
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