Paula Goldsmith Poet Rhyme

Full Circle

When I was little it was off to the playground we would go,                                                                                 my cheeks would have a rosy pink glow.                          I loved when I was pushed in the swing,                          going through the breeze made me want to sing.              Then I grew up,                                                              I was no longer that young pup.                                      The years came and it was now time to date,                    off to the playground we went then played and ate.          We would swing and swing,                                              old memories from young it did bring.                              Many years later I had a child,                                        now off to the playground he smiled.


Date Written:6/17/2021
Note: True story.

Honorable Mention 

PLAYGROUND Contest Judged: 7/3/2021 
Sponsored by: Shreya LN

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Beata Agustin July 5, 2021 at 6:54 AM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... evoking memories of childhood, especially of pure joy experienced in the playground. God bless you. Paula Goldsmith July 5, 2021 at 1:12 PM Thank You, for writing and for your Congratulations. It is an honor to have a win. Glad you like this fun playground write. A place for all ages to have fun. Have a blessed day/week writing away...................

Christuraj Alex July 3, 2021 at 10:09 AM Wonderful. Congratulations! Paula Goldsmith July 3, 2021 at 12:43 PM Thank You, for writing and for your Congratulations. It is an honor to have a win. Glad you like this fun write. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away...................

Shreya Ln July 3, 2021 at 9:32 AM Congratulations on your placement! Well done depicting the vast circle of life :) Paula Goldsmith July 3, 2021 at 12:42 PM Thank You, for writing and for your Congratulations. It is an honor to have a win in your contest. Glad you like this fun playground write. The playground has many wonderful memories. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away...................

Gershon Wolf June 21, 2021 at 6:14 PM Paula's playground -- the playground of Life! Nicely penned, Paula. Cheers, Gershon Paula Goldsmith June 22, 2021 at 12:31 PM Thanks for your note. Glad you like this one. The playground has many wonderful memories. Have a blessed day...................

Heidi Sands June 17, 2021 at 1:08 PM Such special trips to the playground Paula. This brings the reader right there :) Paula Goldsmith June 18, 2021 at 10:53 AM Thanks for your note. Glad you like this write. It was full of joy and memories. Have a blessed day/weekend with hugs...............

Jennifer Proxenos June 17, 2021 at 12:10 PM What a lovely write as you keep repeating now off to the playground we go first as a child, then as an adult and then your child. Enjoyed thoroughly Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Paula Goldsmith June 18, 2021 at 10:52 AM Thanks for your note. Glad you like this playground write. It was full of memories. Have a blessed day/weekend with hugs...............