Mohan Chutani Poet Rhyme

Fulfilment Minichu

thrown in wordly orbit
we all are striving to achieve that happiness 
in a split !

what life begets
box full of emptiness
why fret?

frill, thrill
is it hopeless?
chill !!

thrown in wordly orbit
box full of emptiness 
chill !!

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Sara Kendrick September 23, 2024 at 1:43 AM I received a soupmail from you, and I can't go to it to see what it says. Since someone else got one maybe it was a mass soupmail going out. Nice writing. Sara K Mohan Chutani September 23, 2024 at 1:54 AM thanks. sorry for that as could not put a subject to it. will revert soon.

Joanna Daniel September 22, 2024 at 11:34 PM Nice example, Mohan:) I received a soup mail from you, but it has no subject, hence I am unable to open it... Mohan Chutani September 22, 2024 at 11:54 PM thanks. sorry for that as could not put a subject to it. will revert soon.