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Fulfilment

Minichu

Times when peace fills my soul Those times fulfill my life with a joyful river Then I'm whole Close your eyes, feel All the essence that peace delivers Surreal It seems Only comes in Streams Times when peace fills my soul All the essence that peace delivers Streams
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Agustin Avatar
October 28, 2024 at 9:48 PM
Wow! Thanks for sharing these words of wisdom. Thanks likewise for your uplifting comments. God bless you.
Kendrick Avatar
October 29, 2024 at 5:19 AM
Why, thank you, Beata, for the nice review of my work. I need all the blessings I can get. Sara K
Wolf Avatar
September 22, 2024 at 7:32 PM
So many points to ponder here, Sara, framed in dream-like imagery. Lovely! Thanks, Gershon
Kendrick Avatar
September 23, 2024 at 1:30 AM
I appreciate the nice review, Gershon. Your visits are uplifting. Sara K
Dietrich Avatar
September 22, 2024 at 12:44 PM
Beautiful message in this, Sara
Kendrick Avatar
September 22, 2024 at 1:41 PM
Thank you, Andrea. I am glad you saw the message. Sara K
Empress Avatar
September 22, 2024 at 9:42 AM
This is so serene dear sara, as i read your minichu i felt the essence of peace especially as i read the lines “ Close your eyes, feel All the essence that peace delivers Surreal” so soulful! You did this form very well i think. Pleasure reading your work! Sending you light always
Kendrick Avatar
September 22, 2024 at 1:40 PM
IE, Not a contest entry. These are not so easy to write. I probably will try to write another one or maybe not. Thanks for the nice review of my work. Sara K
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