Fulfilment

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Minichu Times when peace fills my soul Those times fulfill my life with a joyful river Then I'm whole Close your eyes, feel All the essence that peace delivers Surreal It seems Only comes in Streams Times when peace fills my soul All the essence that peace delivers Streams

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Beata Agustin

Date: 10/28/2024 9:48:00 PM

Wow! Thanks for sharing these words of wisdom. Thanks likewise for your uplifting comments. God bless you.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/29/2024 5:19:00 AM

Why, thank you, Beata, for the nice review of my work. I need all the blessings I can get. Sara K

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/22/2024 7:32:00 PM

So many points to ponder here, Sara, framed in dream-like imagery. Lovely! Thanks, Gershon

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/23/2024 1:30:00 AM

I appreciate the nice review, Gershon. Your visits are uplifting. Sara K

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/22/2024 12:44:00 PM

Beautiful message in this, Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/22/2024 1:41:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea. I am glad you saw the message. Sara K

Ink Empress

Date: 9/22/2024 9:42:00 AM

This is so serene dear sara, as i read your minichu i felt the essence of peace especially as i read the lines “ Close your eyes, feel All the essence that peace delivers Surreal” so soulful! You did this form very well i think. Pleasure reading your work! Sending you light always

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/22/2024 1:40:00 PM

IE, Not a contest entry. These are not so easy to write. I probably will try to write another one or maybe not. Thanks for the nice review of my work. Sara K