Fulfillment

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9.05an October 16, 2024

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professional children with good life and jobs are fathomless achievement thanks heaven child’s fulfilled dreams are parents’ great accomplishment praise HIM success contentment yes! professional children are parents’ great accomplishment yes!

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Arthur Vaso

Date: 10/17/2024 11:31:00 PM

Nice we all want better for our children! :)

Len Gasun
Date: 10/19/2024 4:15:00 PM

Thank you so much my dear poet friend for reading my poem and your uplifting words. Yes, most parents work hard and sacrifice a lot for their children coz for them education is the best inheritance. Most parents want the best for their children. But then success also lies on the behavior of a child toward his/her studies.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 10/17/2024 4:52:00 AM

Dear Len, I loved every aspect as you conveyed artistically a sense of parental pride and gratitude for children's professional success. I think what I really loved was its strength, which lies in its simplicity and directness, which give it an almost prayer-like quality. Excellent Read! Autumn, Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Len Gasun
Date: 10/19/2024 4:10:00 PM

Thank you so much my dear poet friend for coming by to read my poem and your encouraging comments. Blessings to you too my dear poet friend. Hugs

Jan Allison

Date: 10/16/2024 1:59:00 AM

Having my son is my greatest achievement ever, he had a bad time at uni with his 2 school pals (Brothers) dying of a drugs related incident, and he wanted to pull out of uni. then dad died and the boys parents came to the funeral (theyd not met my dad but came to support me), i asked them to have a word with my son they said we have lost our boys - you MUST carry on. He picked himself up and went on to be top student, won 3 awards and was internationally recognised so yes I am proud! hugs jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/19/2024 4:25:00 PM

aww thanks Len, the first time I can recall my mum saying she was proud of me was after I'd been on stage of the gaiety theatre reciting 3 of my poems at a fundraising event(first time on a stage) before that it was always my sister who was praised but I am riding high with my poetry and book2 is being edited - amazing for someone who hated poetry at school and only started writing in 2013! hugs jan xx

Len Gasun
Date: 10/19/2024 4:08:00 PM

Thanks my dear poet friend Jan. I've written this because I can feel the parents' emotion when they've seen all their children graduated to college, especially those who've sacrificed a lot to send them to school. Also a proud student for the success of the many years of endeavor. I'm proud of you too and Congratulations to you and your son. Many hugs

Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/17/2024 11:32:00 PM

and here I was thinking correcting some of my poems was!!!! sheeeeesh!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/16/2024 2:11:00 AM

got to say I would be proud of any child of mine and not everyone goes to uni - our son is the first one in either side of the family who did go to university - we got degrees in the university of life!

Ink Empress

Date: 10/15/2024 11:36:00 PM

Dear Len, talented soul, i agree, So true, i think parents find it really fulfilling and celebratory to witness their children thriving and doing well in any department they long to flourish in, hence why i love the lines “ child’s fulfilled dreams are parents’ great accomplishment praise HIM ” do well written! I absolutely loved it! Best wishes, sending you light alwaysss!

Len Gasun
Date: 10/19/2024 4:03:00 PM

Thank you so much for reading my poem my dearest more talented poetic friend of mine. So much appreciated and your uplifting comments too. I thought of writing this because mostly parents work and sacrifice for the education of their children. I'm not yet a parent but I know how it feels to be a parent of students who've all finished their studies and find jobs. Thanks a lot. Hugs