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Fulcrum Of A Rose

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Written  June 22, 2025    19.18pm

 

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Line of Inquiry - track where lies the fulcrum of the fragrance of a rose, then likewise find within, your soul.
People murmured, she’s the rose among the thorns When they saw me playing with my brothers, not alone Same line was heard more often around When I raced with little boys, just to get a crown. Then, I always sang the prayer song of my mother Asking God to make me grow and bloom like flower I felt God’s abundant care as my bud bloomed Into a rose in my community started from home. As first child and single rose who’d dawned so early Petals’ exquisite hue displayed more prominently As floral leaf burgeoned, sprawled... satiated their eyes My doubt on fragrance, can they smell or feel me inside? Then, I sang my own prayer song with fervor in my room Asking God to help me track, diffuse my fragrance’s fulcrum After a while, I felt God’s unceasing light and reply: My child, my love's generosity with joy's in your soul, shine, emit, fly.

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Date: 6/22/2025 1:06:00 PM
What a lovely write and picture you have here. Great last line. "Good Luck" A winner to me. Hugs... Have a lovely/blessed day writing away...............
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