Notes About The Poem

Poetric form: The Fulcrum, designed by Suzette Richards (2025)

Key Features:

· Five lines only—cantered or otherwise.

· Narrative or conceptual setup in lines 1–4.

· Final line as fulcrum—a hinge that reframes or destabilises meaning.

· No resolution—the poem ends in tension, ambiguity, or conceptual tilt.

· Tone: Reflective, restrained, suggestive rather than declarative.

Fulcrum

I used to live my life
by planning every step
factoring in every contingency 
like a sales pitch for a Life Insurance policy.
I flipped the coin and it landed on its edge.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Hind Avatar
August 22, 2025 at 6:02 PM
Empowering, Suzette. I like where it's headed. If I interpret rightly, :)
Richards Avatar
August 23, 2025 at 11:54 PM
Thanks, Paige. That is the beauty of poetry - the poet does not explain or dictate how a poem should be interpreted - it is up to the reader what and how he sees it. :)
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