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Fugitive

Once a jade vision 
Briefly twisted in the breeze 
Now brown and demised

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Jimmy Anderson

April 24, 2010 at 9:19 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest, Laura..Jimmy

John Freeman

April 23, 2010 at 6:35 PM

Congratulations Laura, on your success in Raul's contest. Agape, Moses

April 23, 2010 at 12:28 PM

Good use of imagery in your poem. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Raul's contest. Enjoy your honor. Keep up the good writing. Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown

April 23, 2010 at 6:30 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's Descending Grace contest Laura. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

April 23, 2010 at 6:25 AM

Congrats Laura on your winning poem in Raul's contest... wonderful words to depict the photo..enjoy my friend..luv.. Linda-Marie

Carolyn Devonshire

April 22, 2010 at 11:46 PM

Congratulations on your win, Laura. Love, Carolyn

Raul Moreno

April 22, 2010 at 11:20 PM

Laura, congratulations on your success in my contest...Raul

Carolyn Devonshire

April 22, 2010 at 7:19 PM

VERY, VERY NICE! I think you captured the image in the picture creatively. The second line is absolutely awesome! I see a big win in your future, Laura. Love, Carolyn