Frustration

Festering corpse of thoughts
.            Fuelling resentment
.            Fulminates as rage or
             Fumes silently within.   
             Frequent let downs defeat
             Failed attempts to attain
.            Fulfillment dispirit.


Date Sept 23, 2016
Contest
PLEIADES F
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

Poem

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Singh Avatar
September 27, 2016 at 8:57 PM
Thank you, Kim But I do realise I need to be more creative. Seem to be getting repetitive.
Merryman Avatar
September 27, 2016 at 2:36 PM
Your words give a clear picture of frustration, Sushma. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
Singh Avatar
September 27, 2016 at 8:57 PM
Thanks, Kim
Andresen Avatar
September 27, 2016 at 3:51 AM
- Sushma, congratulations on your great wins poems - I do not participate often in contest, but this I like very much - A challenge like a puzzle .... not easy ... but Pleiades poems is a wonderful form - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
September 26, 2016 at 6:23 PM
Great description of frustration! many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Singh Avatar
September 26, 2016 at 11:42 PM
Huge Congrats to you too on an amazing Pleiades! Thank you!
Andresen Avatar
September 24, 2016 at 7:37 AM
- I like this contest - Great written, Sushma - Good luck in the contest - Best wishes for a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Singh Avatar
September 24, 2016 at 7:40 AM
Same here.It really fires your imagination. Thanks for the warm wishes n hope you too have a great weekend
Kannan Avatar
September 24, 2016 at 4:19 AM
Nicely penned...Good luck with the contest...
Singh Avatar
September 24, 2016 at 4:21 AM
Thanks n same wishes to you!
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