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Fruit

scarlet sweet cherries
and blueberries summer's best
orange days of zest

june blackberry pies
teal skies bursts of raspberries
strawberries pink moon
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Dietrich Avatar
July 14, 2023 at 11:19 AM
I love this one. It's so unique. Congrats on the win.
Buehler Avatar
July 30, 2023 at 11:31 AM
Your kind thoughts are so much appreciated, Andrea.
Kauffman Avatar
July 14, 2023 at 9:45 AM
The world of summer fruit is truly your rainbow, Evelyn. Have said it before, and will probably say it again, your use of color sets the poetic world aglow! I love each line but especially "orange days of zest." This haiku set "bursts" with summer's "zest" and delicious tastes! Congratulations on your win my friend. Blessings!
Buehler Avatar
July 14, 2023 at 10:41 AM
Thank you for the great pleasure of your lovely comments, Sam. I hope your weekend is blessed. Hugs. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
July 14, 2023 at 6:34 AM
Congratulations! I love this one!
Buehler Avatar
July 14, 2023 at 10:35 AM
Glad to hear it! Thank you.
Merryman Avatar
July 12, 2023 at 6:19 PM
Love your creative use of color in your haiku, Evelyn! congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
Buehler Avatar
July 12, 2023 at 8:12 PM
Thank you for the pleasure of your lovely comment, Kim. My very best wishes.
Goldsmith Avatar
July 12, 2023 at 11:34 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading this one again. Let's eat!!! Have a blessed day writing away...................
Buehler Avatar
July 12, 2023 at 2:26 PM
Your words are so uplifting, Paula. Thanks for the sunny remarks. Have a blessed evening. :)
Andresen Avatar
July 12, 2023 at 9:34 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Evelyn :) - hugs
Buehler Avatar
July 12, 2023 at 2:23 PM
I appreciate your comment very much, Anne-Lise. :) hugs
Kitchin Avatar
July 12, 2023 at 5:18 AM
Evelyn, congratulations on your winning placement with your sweet set of summer fruit haiku's!
Buehler Avatar
July 12, 2023 at 2:22 PM
Thank you very much for your kind words of congratulations, Tania. I enjoyed your contest so much. Have a lovely evening. :)
Andresen Avatar
July 1, 2023 at 11:04 AM
- The wonderful summertime with all the smells and tastes ... lovely written, Evelyn :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
Buehler Avatar
July 1, 2023 at 11:35 AM
I appreciate that a lot, Anne-Lise. :) hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
June 29, 2023 at 12:07 PM
I love your Haiku write/picture. Let's eat. I did this one on birds. Have a great day writing away....................
Buehler Avatar
June 29, 2023 at 1:38 PM
Thank you very much for your appreciation, Paula. Your poem is quite lovely, too.
Pandit Avatar
June 29, 2023 at 3:42 AM
A wonderful images in every line. A splendid pair of haiku poems, Evelyn--they bring forth your photo in words for the reader.
Buehler Avatar
June 29, 2023 at 1:31 PM
Thank you so much, Vijay. :)
Buhagiar Avatar
June 28, 2023 at 10:26 PM
Alas strawberries ae out of season now. But what a delicious meal, Evelyn.
Buehler Avatar
June 29, 2023 at 1:28 PM
Your words are greatly appreciated, my friend. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
June 28, 2023 at 7:25 PM
Berry delightful!!
Buehler Avatar
June 28, 2023 at 8:25 PM
Thank you, Kim. Your words delight.
Allison Avatar
June 28, 2023 at 5:19 PM
ooh your poem makes me want to make a summer pudding Evelyn, lovely picture too! hugs jan xx
Buehler Avatar
June 28, 2023 at 8:24 PM
Tasty pudding is a very pleasant thought, Jan. Thank you for your very gratifying response. :) hugs and blessings
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