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Frugal One

frugal one squeeze roll
toothpaste tube last fate fold love-
your origami

fatelovemiss yousenryu

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Sara Kendrick

July 11, 2021 at 3:51 PM

I thought that I had read this one and commented on it but I guess I did not. I enjoyed reading it. Yes, there are those of us who are frugal and then there are those who are not. Thanks for your visit to my pages. Sara

Paul Callus

July 11, 2021 at 9:27 AM

This is quite original, Richard....I love it! I'll have to contemplate on my toothpaste tube and see if it brings any inspiration:) Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

July 4, 2021 at 7:07 PM

how cute that origami line!!

Quoth Theraven

July 5, 2021 at 11:19 AM

Hello Heidi, Thank you, tempted to put a dedication to the one who reminded me of it in life. -Richard

Panagiota Romios

July 2, 2021 at 8:48 AM

Richard..your brightness shines. Wow, A fav senryu for me Pangie xx

Quoth Theraven

July 2, 2021 at 11:53 AM

Panagiota, Thank you for stopping by. I just read your sizzling poem. Perfect for Summer nights. -Richard

Susan Ashley

July 1, 2021 at 8:36 AM

Oh, such sadness unfolds with each line. So poignant and expressive, Richard, especially the souvenir imagery of the last line. Warmest wishes and hugs.. ~Susan

Quoth Theraven

July 2, 2021 at 11:50 AM

Hello Susan, Thank you for the warm wishes and hugs. I hug you right back. How are you this 4th of July eve? What origami we create in normal life ventures. Sometimes it's all that remains. -Richard