Frozen Waterfall

winter’s fickle bride 
    weeps behind an opaque veil…
      spring's warm kiss beguiles
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Adams Avatar
February 20, 2015 at 8:12 AM
Great Haiku, David. An easy seven
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 8, 2015 at 7:51 PM
Outstanding haiku David. I don't see many I like as much as this one. I am fav'ing this beauty!
Dietrich Avatar
February 7, 2015 at 9:45 PM
wowowow, this is really a TOP form haiku. SEVEN
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February 7, 2015 at 5:23 AM
Excellent haiku, David!! Glad I stopped to read this one. A top 7 rating it does merit. All the best. // paul
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