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Frozen In Time

flirtatious finesse frosted feathery lashes frozen in death mask Poetry contest: Get Romantic Visual No 7

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Casarah Nance

Date: 3/11/2015 5:47:00 PM

Oh I love the alliteration in your haiku, this is one of my favs, grats :)

Kim Shaw
Date: 3/11/2015 6:40:00 PM

Thanks Casarah! Thank you for the warm encouragement, it's very appreciated! Hugs, Kimberly xx

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/9/2015 1:37:00 PM

Creative winning work!!Way to go!!Sara

Kim Shaw
Date: 3/9/2015 1:45:00 PM

Hi Sara! Thank you! It was exciting for me, a first. Hugs, Kimberly xx

Skat A

Date: 3/8/2015 6:21:00 PM

KIMBERLY, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win ~SKAT~

Kim Shaw
Date: 3/8/2015 6:25:00 PM

Thank you, SKAT! A very exciting first for me. I am really very grateful and happy:)). Hugs and love, Kimberly xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/8/2015 11:59:00 AM

Kimberly, Congratulations, a mighty romantic win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Kim Shaw
Date: 3/8/2015 1:54:00 PM

Hi Linda! Thank you so much! It is my first win and I am thrilled. I appreciate all comments and reviews, as I am very new to poetry and desire to learn and improve my work. Have a lovely day! Hugs and love, Kimberly xx

Hija De La Luna

Date: 3/7/2015 8:48:00 PM

Wow, Your creativity shines! Congratulations, Kimberly!

Kim Shaw
Date: 3/7/2015 9:11:00 PM

Thank you, Hija! What a sweet thing to say. Hugs and love, Kimberly

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/7/2015 8:13:00 PM

Great imagery, Kimberly, and I love your creative take on the pic...congrats! Hugs, Rhonda

Kim Shaw
Date: 3/7/2015 9:09:00 PM

Thank you for the very kind comments, Rhonda! Hugs back to you xx

Joseph May

Date: 3/7/2015 4:03:00 PM

Congrats on a fine win Kimberly

Kim Shaw
Date: 3/7/2015 9:08:00 PM

Thank you, Joseph! My first, it's very thrilling. Hugs, Kimberly

Jan Allison

Date: 3/7/2015 2:59:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Kimberly:-) Hugs Jan xx

Kim Shaw
Date: 3/7/2015 3:37:00 PM

Thank you, Jan. I truly appreciate your kindness and encouragement! Hugs, Kimberly xx

Sandra Haight

Date: 3/7/2015 2:18:00 PM

Hi Kimberly, congratulations on your fine win in the contest. Your interpretation of the visual was stark but believable of his love being "frozen in time." Sandra

Kim Shaw
Date: 3/7/2015 3:35:00 PM

Hi Sandra, thank you so much for your very kind words and comments. Hugs, Kimberly

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 3/7/2015 6:13:00 AM

3fs..interesting. Congrats Kimberly .Love>>>rajat

Kim Shaw
Date: 3/7/2015 8:10:00 AM

Thank you, Rajat! It was my first attempt and I am very thankful for my placement. hugs and love, Kimberly

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 3/7/2015 4:59:00 AM

congratz for the win.. :)1

Kim Shaw
Date: 3/7/2015 8:13:00 AM

Thank you, Olive! It is my first and feels good. I appreciate you stopping by to share your kind words. Hugs, Kimberly xx

Kp Nunez

Date: 3/7/2015 1:27:00 AM

Congrats Kim! Hugs and smiles...:)

Kim Shaw
Date: 3/7/2015 8:15:00 AM

Thank you, Kim! Sending hugs and smiles back to you for a lovely day. Kimberly xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/6/2015 11:58:00 PM

love the alliteration of this one though I thought the last line seemed a bit somber for the visual number seven. Congrats in my contest.

Kim Shaw
Date: 3/7/2015 8:05:00 AM

Thank you for the kind comments and recognition in your contest, Andrea! Haha, I couldn't see their faces on my little tablet, thus I was left with my imagination, which created a heartbroken lover finding his true love 'frozen in time', sadly. Sorry for the somber ending. Hugs and love, Kimberly

Jan Allison

Date: 3/3/2015 6:29:00 PM

Lovely imagery and alliteration - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx

Kim Shaw
Date: 3/3/2015 6:35:00 PM

Thank you Jan! My first contest entry. Thank you for the lovely encouragement. Love & hugs, Kim