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Frozen In Time

 Water stuck in time,
 Seeping through the frozen cracks;
 Gleaming off the sun.

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Brian Strand

May 23, 2009 at 12:54 AM

Great imagery Justin.Rgds Brian

Alley Poe

May 19, 2009 at 6:27 PM

Oh wow this imagery pierced straight into my soul. -Alley

Elizabeth Neal

May 18, 2009 at 11:18 PM

You are writing up a storm in this concise form. My favorite forms too, love your work. Love E.

Abe Lopez

May 18, 2009 at 4:14 PM

This is a very nice write, water is such a powerful element. Fast moving water can be so destructive and frozen water can flex its muscles and can be just as powerful.

John Patrick Robbins Aka Gonzo

May 18, 2009 at 3:30 PM

Good job Justin never could write a haiku myself. really like the title good job

Sajdah Al-Riyami

May 18, 2009 at 8:17 AM

Nice.

Daniel Neal

May 17, 2009 at 10:05 PM

Nice work Justin, love the first line. DN

Cesar Cantu

May 17, 2009 at 9:46 PM

Hey, nice one!!! Frozen water managed to cheat time, or at least it found a way to avoid being worried about it...not a natural creation after all (time is man made, I guess); thanks for the experience!!!=) You just changed the perception of ice for me =D that rocks!!!