Home » Poems » Justin Hensley » Frozen In Time

Frozen In Time

Water stuck in time, Seeping through the frozen cracks; Gleaming off the sun.

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Brian Strand

Date: 5/23/2009 12:54:00 AM

Great imagery Justin.Rgds Brian

Alley Poe

Date: 5/19/2009 6:27:00 PM

Oh wow this imagery pierced straight into my soul. -Alley

Elizabeth Neal

Date: 5/18/2009 11:18:00 PM

You are writing up a storm in this concise form. My favorite forms too, love your work. Love E.

Abe Lopez

Date: 5/18/2009 4:14:00 PM

This is a very nice write, water is such a powerful element. Fast moving water can be so destructive and frozen water can flex its muscles and can be just as powerful.

John Patrick Robbins Aka Gonzo

Date: 5/18/2009 3:30:00 PM

Good job Justin never could write a haiku myself. really like the title good job

Sajdah Al-Riyami

Date: 5/18/2009 8:17:00 AM

Nice.

Daniel Neal

Date: 5/17/2009 10:05:00 PM

Nice work Justin, love the first line. DN

Cesar Cantu

Date: 5/17/2009 9:46:00 PM

Hey, nice one!!! Frozen water managed to cheat time, or at least it found a way to avoid being worried about it...not a natural creation after all (time is man made, I guess); thanks for the experience!!!=) You just changed the perception of ice for me =D that rocks!!!

Raul Moreno

Date: 5/17/2009 9:07:00 PM

Nice work on the imagery, glaciers casts beautiful scenes...Raul

Barb Geerts

Date: 5/17/2009 9:01:00 PM

sounds like my life sometimes... Great Write