Frozen In Darkness

As the frozen air touched my skin
Shuddered I with sense of Dead,
Being heart and blood cold in sin
Recalling my decisive day’s dread.

The silence grew more than silent.
A hushing sound roamed around.
Whisperings caused soul’s torment
As the tiny rabbit chased by hound.

The sounds audible yet unheard
Being wordless yet only in vowels.
The hurling violent winds stroked
The senses as the wavering bells.

The silent sound broke by dog barks
As if marking the presence of Death
Who called me or summoned in Darks
Of eternity that is buried beneath.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 10/21/2011 9:48:00 PM
Again, Thanks to you, Dr. Ram Mehta.
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Date: 10/21/2011 9:43:00 PM
As i forgot, Thanks Baity.
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Date: 10/21/2011 6:21:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Osman
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Date: 10/21/2011 7:15:00 AM
Thanks, again, both for commenting and the wish.
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Date: 10/21/2011 5:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Osman. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/5/2011 11:29:00 AM
Thanks Linda for your wonderful comments. You have been kind to me. Thanks.
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Date: 10/5/2011 11:24:00 AM
thanks Dr. Ram mehta , for your wonderful comments.
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Date: 10/5/2011 11:22:00 AM
thanks Stephen for your appreciation.
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Date: 10/5/2011 11:21:00 AM
Special thanks to Carol Brown for such nice words to welcome me. thanks.
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Date: 8/17/2011 12:19:00 AM
Thanks everyone for such wonderful comments. Thanks for your apprciation and support. I am glad that this poem pleased you so much. Thanks. :)
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Date: 8/17/2011 12:07:00 AM
Excellent write Osman...deep and very creative.....thanks for sharing
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Date: 8/16/2011 11:17:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative poetry tonight.. enjoy the site as u continue to share words with luv..
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Date: 8/16/2011 10:15:00 PM
very meaningful and creative expressions, Osman
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Date: 8/16/2011 10:26:00 AM
Deep write Osman. Enjoyed and welcome to the soup! Steve
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Date: 8/16/2011 7:03:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be Osman. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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