Frozen In Cyrstalline Number 7

The moon so close it was touchable,
framed mid the snow clad ancient trees.

written 11/21/2014

contest: Frozen in Crystalline

sponsor: Andrea

syllables 9/8
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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A   Avatar
April 5, 2015 at 11:19 PM
Shadow, Thank you for the sweet reply to my comment. Have yourself a Happy Easter Love LINDA
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November 30, 2014 at 3:29 PM
I love the picture you created, Shadow! Congrats to you on an awesome win! Hugs, Rhonda
A  Avatar
November 30, 2014 at 1:55 AM
SHADOW, Congratulations with your awesome "Frozen In Crystalline" win. ~SKAT~
Onclaud Avatar
November 30, 2014 at 12:56 AM
my, a wonderful scene fro here, shadow..cheers to you for your great win
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 10:14 PM
beautiful! kudos Shadow.. :)!
Haight Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 6:27 PM
Shadow, congratulations for your win! Nice imagery! Hugs, Sandra
Mohn Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 3:45 PM
Lovely Shadow...big congrats to you
Schumacker Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 2:23 PM
Hi Shadow, Very nice win. Excellent images and structure. Have a great week end. Earl
Allison Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 12:24 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Shadow:-) Hugs Jan xx
Hamilton Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 12:41 PM
ty Jan hugs
Lamoureux Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 9:22 AM
Congratulations Shadow.
Hamilton Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 12:42 PM
ty Rick hugs
Mandani Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 9:00 AM
You can just walk over and touch the moon! Very nice.
Hamilton Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 12:42 PM
ty Abdul hugs
Kendrick Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 8:26 AM
Congrats on your winning work..There are some very interesting and descriptive works in the winner's list..A fine group of poets gather at this soup pot..Sara..Thanks for the honor of placing in your contest..I appreciate you reading and finding my work worthy..I got Queenie when I was 7 and she died from a heat stroke when I was 17..
Hamilton Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 12:44 PM
ty Sara hugs
Kendrick Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 8:26 AM
She was a collie rough coat herding dog..My father loved her..Sara
May Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 6:22 AM
Congrats on a fine win Shadow
Hamilton Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 12:44 PM
ty Joseph hugs
Callus Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 6:20 AM
Love your descriptive poem, Shadow; you paint a lovely picture! Congrats on your fine win. // paul
Hamilton Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 12:43 PM
ty Paul hugs
Kayode Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 1:21 AM
Congrats Shadow on the win , a nice picture you printed here...huggs
Hamilton Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 5:08 AM
ty Kayod hugs
Dietrich Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 12:58 AM
Lovely poem on the touchable moon. I am surprised more poets did not choose to go with picture number seven!! Congrats to you in my contest, shadow dear.
Hamilton Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 5:07 AM
ty for the honour Andrea it was fun to write it hugs
Kendrick Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 5:25 AM
Reads like a winner..Very descriptive of the scene..Way to go for the contest..Sara
Hamilton Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 4:04 PM
ty Sara hope all is well hugs
Deschler Avatar
November 23, 2014 at 8:45 PM
I love the beautiful imagery in just these two short lines! Very nicely done, Shadow. Good luck in Andrea's contest!
Hamilton Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 4:03 PM
ty dear Kelly appreciated hugs
Lamoureux Avatar
November 22, 2014 at 9:41 AM
Was it supposed to be 17 sylables per line or 17 total??? If so I will have to rewrite mine. I like what you have done with it.
Hamilton Avatar
November 22, 2014 at 11:58 AM
it is me Rick 17 syllables I have adjusted it ty hugs
A. Sharma Avatar
November 22, 2014 at 12:50 AM
Wow great painting with words Shadow! Gl in contest!
Hamilton Avatar
November 22, 2014 at 3:31 AM
ty Dr Upma appreciated hugs
Meade Avatar
November 21, 2014 at 10:26 PM
I see the moon dancing in the tree tops. Very nice.
Hamilton Avatar
November 22, 2014 at 3:30 AM
ty David so happy you like it hugs
A   Avatar
November 21, 2014 at 8:20 PM
i love it....PD
Hamilton Avatar
November 22, 2014 at 3:30 AM
hey there have missed you lots Linda ty hugssss
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 21, 2014 at 7:17 PM
Sounds like a beautiful picture Shadow. Good luck in the contest.
Hamilton Avatar
November 22, 2014 at 3:28 AM
ty Brenda so pleased you like it hugs
Allison Avatar
November 21, 2014 at 6:25 PM
Beautiful imagery Shadow - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Hamilton Avatar
November 22, 2014 at 3:28 AM
ty Jan hugs
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