Frozen In Crystalline---Number 3

Frozen in his tracks, a white tail deer hesitates to crack the gilded grass
_________________________________ 11/21/14
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Onclaud Avatar
November 22, 2014 at 1:17 PM
vivid image of an animal almost frozen along winter's thick panel.. uniquely worded, carrie.. really brilliant.. huggs
A. Sharma Avatar
November 21, 2014 at 8:45 PM
Wow Carrie amazing write wid wonderful expressions! Best wishes in contest!
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