Home » Poems » Jack Horne » Frozen In Crystalline: Pic Number Two

Frozen In Crystalline: Pic Number Two

We cuddled there in days of old, but now our bench is alone and cold. For Andrea’s Frozen in Crystaline contest, inspired by Picture Number Two

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 12/13/2014 12:13:00 PM

Creates a picture of you my friend. I have not been on line a lot lately. I have finished my xmas shopping and wrapping and having the family over xmas eve. love phyl

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 11/30/2014 3:41:00 PM

I love yours, Jack...sad but still giving a glimpse of happy memories. Congrats to you on an awesome win! Hugs, Rhonda

Skat A

Date: 11/30/2014 1:54:00 AM

JACK, Congratulations with your awesome "Frozen In Crystalline" win. ~SKAT~

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/30/2014 12:48:00 AM

ohh, so poignant and lovely, jack..cheers to you for your great win

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 11/29/2014 1:13:00 PM

hi jack beautiful congrats on win hugs

Jan Allison

Date: 11/29/2014 12:20:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Jack) Hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/29/2014 9:01:00 AM

I really like this one. Congrats.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/29/2014 7:57:00 AM

Congrats on your winning work..There are some very interesting and descriptive works in the winner's list..A fine group of poets gather at this soup pot..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/29/2014 12:51:00 AM

Jack, I once wrote a poem about a lonely park bench. I wonder if you were remembering my poem when you did this one. I love that theme you went to with the bench. congrats in my contest.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 11/26/2014 2:53:00 AM

nice pen Jack gl in contest hugs

Robert Johnson

Date: 11/25/2014 11:06:00 PM

A picture of a memory in an empty heart. Lamenting a love now long gone now that they're apart. A new bench isn't going to solve what made love disappear. Searching in tomorrows mist requires we have no fear. Peace. :)

Robert Stoner Jr

Date: 11/25/2014 5:12:00 PM

very nice, good luck in the contest

Eve Roper

Date: 11/25/2014 5:10:00 PM

Jack, Awesome write, I do like this crystalline wirte. good luck on the contest :) blessings and a Happy Thanksgiving eve 7

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/25/2014 4:10:00 PM

Ahh!!! Very emotive work..I could just seen the lonely bench covered in snow..Thanks for all the visits to my page..Sara

Paul Callus

Date: 11/25/2014 3:51:00 PM

Longing...sadness make this a beautiful crystalline, Jack. [I feel sorry for that bench; perhaps another worthy couple will come along to keep it company!] Hope you're keeping well. // paul

Paul Callus
Date: 11/29/2014 5:52:00 AM

Back with congratulations, Jack! Much deserved! // paul

David Meade

Date: 11/25/2014 3:22:00 PM

Very nice -- alone and cold because of winter or because one is gone . . . I glad you left it up to the reader. Great poem.

Jan Allison

Date: 11/25/2014 2:42:00 PM

ooh very clever jack - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx