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Frozen In Crystalline: Pic Number Two

We cuddled there in days of old,
but now our bench is alone and cold.

For Andrea’s Frozen in Crystaline contest, inspired by Picture Number Two

Copyright © Jack Horne | Year Posted 2014

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Phyllis Babcock Date: 12/13/2014 12:13:00 PM Creates a picture of you my friend. I have not been on line a lot lately. I have finished my xmas shopping and wrapping and having the family over xmas eve. love phyl Login to Reply

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 11/30/2014 3:41:00 PM I love yours, Jack...sad but still giving a glimpse of happy memories. Congrats to you on an awesome win! Hugs, Rhonda Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 11/30/2014 1:54:00 AM JACK, Congratulations with your awesome "Frozen In Crystalline" win. ~SKAT~ Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 11/30/2014 12:48:00 AM ohh, so poignant and lovely, jack..cheers to you for your great win Login to Reply

Shadow Hamilton Date: 11/29/2014 1:13:00 PM hi jack beautiful congrats on win hugs Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 11/29/2014 12:20:00 PM Dropping back with my congrats Jack) Hugs Jan xx Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/29/2014 9:01:00 AM I really like this one. Congrats. Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 11/29/2014 7:57:00 AM Congrats on your winning work..There are some very interesting and descriptive works in the winner's list..A fine group of poets gather at this soup pot..Sara Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/29/2014 12:51:00 AM Jack, I once wrote a poem about a lonely park bench. I wonder if you were remembering my poem when you did this one. I love that theme you went to with the bench. congrats in my contest. Login to Reply

Shadow Hamilton Date: 11/26/2014 2:53:00 AM nice pen Jack gl in contest hugs Login to Reply

Robert Johnson Date: 11/25/2014 11:06:00 PM A picture of a memory in an empty heart. Lamenting a love now long gone now that they're apart. A new bench isn't going to solve what made love disappear. Searching in tomorrows mist requires we have no fear. Peace. :) Login to Reply

Robert Stoner Jr Date: 11/25/2014 5:12:00 PM very nice, good luck in the contest Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 11/25/2014 5:10:00 PM Jack, Awesome write, I do like this crystalline wirte. good luck on the contest :) blessings and a Happy Thanksgiving eve 7 Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 11/25/2014 4:10:00 PM Ahh!!! Very emotive work..I could just seen the lonely bench covered in snow..Thanks for all the visits to my page..Sara Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 11/25/2014 3:51:00 PM Longing...sadness make this a beautiful crystalline, Jack. [I feel sorry for that bench; perhaps another worthy couple will come along to keep it company!] Hope you're keeping well. // paul Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 11/29/2014 5:52:00 AM Back with congratulations, Jack! Much deserved! // paul

David Meade Date: 11/25/2014 3:22:00 PM Very nice -- alone and cold because of winter or because one is gone . . . I glad you left it up to the reader. Great poem. Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 11/25/2014 2:42:00 PM ooh very clever jack - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx Login to Reply