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Frozen in Crystalline: Pic Number Two

We cuddled there in days of old,
but now our bench is alone and cold.

For Andrea’s Frozen in Crystaline contest, inspired by Picture Number Two

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/13/2014 12:13:00 PM
Creates a picture of you my friend. I have not been on line a lot lately. I have finished my xmas shopping and wrapping and having the family over xmas eve. love phyl
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Date: 11/30/2014 3:41:00 PM
I love yours, Jack...sad but still giving a glimpse of happy memories. Congrats to you on an awesome win! Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 11/30/2014 1:54:00 AM
JACK, Congratulations with your awesome "Frozen In Crystalline" win. ~SKAT~
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Date: 11/30/2014 12:48:00 AM
ohh, so poignant and lovely, jack..cheers to you for your great win
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Date: 11/29/2014 1:13:00 PM
hi jack beautiful congrats on win hugs
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Date: 11/29/2014 12:20:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Jack) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/29/2014 9:01:00 AM
I really like this one. Congrats.
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Date: 11/29/2014 7:57:00 AM
Congrats on your winning work..There are some very interesting and descriptive works in the winner's list..A fine group of poets gather at this soup pot..Sara
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Date: 11/29/2014 12:51:00 AM
Jack, I once wrote a poem about a lonely park bench. I wonder if you were remembering my poem when you did this one. I love that theme you went to with the bench. congrats in my contest.
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Date: 11/26/2014 2:53:00 AM
nice pen Jack gl in contest hugs
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Date: 11/25/2014 11:06:00 PM
A picture of a memory in an empty heart. Lamenting a love now long gone now that they're apart. A new bench isn't going to solve what made love disappear. Searching in tomorrows mist requires we have no fear. Peace. :)
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Date: 11/25/2014 5:12:00 PM
very nice, good luck in the contest
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Date: 11/25/2014 5:10:00 PM
Jack, Awesome write, I do like this crystalline wirte. good luck on the contest :) blessings and a Happy Thanksgiving eve 7
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Date: 11/25/2014 4:10:00 PM
Ahh!!! Very emotive work..I could just seen the lonely bench covered in snow..Thanks for all the visits to my page..Sara
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Date: 11/25/2014 3:51:00 PM
Longing...sadness make this a beautiful crystalline, Jack. [I feel sorry for that bench; perhaps another worthy couple will come along to keep it company!] Hope you're keeping well. // paul
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Date: 11/29/2014 5:52:00 AM
Back with congratulations, Jack! Much deserved! // paul
Date: 11/25/2014 3:22:00 PM
Very nice -- alone and cold because of winter or because one is gone . . . I glad you left it up to the reader. Great poem.
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Date: 11/25/2014 2:42:00 PM
ooh very clever jack - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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