Frozen In Crystalline

Jeweled circlets of sequined sleet
Crown kings progressing up silent street.

Copyright, November 21, 2014
Faye Lanham Gibson
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Johnson-Saunders Avatar
November 30, 2014 at 12:12 PM
Magical, Faye! Congrats to you on an awesome win!! Hugs, Rhonda
A  Avatar
November 30, 2014 at 1:56 AM
FAYE, Congratulations with your awesome "Frozen In Crystalline" win. ~SKAT~
Onclaud Avatar
November 30, 2014 at 1:09 AM
this simply glistens, faye..cheers to you for your great win
Haight Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 6:33 PM
Hi Faye, congratulations on your win! Hugs, Sandra
Hamilton Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 1:28 PM
superb Faye congrats on win hugs
Allison Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 12:28 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Faye:-) Hugs Jan xx
Kendrick Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 11:32 AM
Congrats on your winning work..There are some very interesting and descriptive works in the winner's list..A fine group of poets gather at this soup pot..Sara
Lamoureux Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 9:32 AM
Great job, I enjoyed. Congratulations.
Callus Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 6:38 AM
Regal imagery in a lovely frozen crystalline. Congrats on your win, Faye. [Just noticed Andy's comment....will go have another look at no. 6:)] // paul
Gibson Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 6:46 AM
Yes, I saw the bridge and tree lined road as the focal point. Andy saw the lake. All is good.
Dietrich Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 1:03 AM
Faye, your poem was very charming and inventive.It was one I might have put higher but I did not see what it had to do with the picture of the blue lake surrounded by trees. what I really like about this one are the crown kings going up that silent street . A great xmas image. congrats in my contest.
Roper Avatar
November 24, 2014 at 6:39 PM
Faye, Nicely staged, Crystalline,:) eve Blessings to you and have a Happy Thanksgiving 7
Trifiatis Avatar
November 24, 2014 at 4:57 PM
Silently majestic, dear Faye!
Ellison Avatar
November 24, 2014 at 3:12 PM
Crystalline conjures up a beautiful winter image... an excellent entry! You did the word justice! Big huggsies XXX
Gifford Avatar
November 24, 2014 at 2:42 PM
a winter image clearly seen. Good luck with your poem. A sure winner!
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 23, 2014 at 9:56 PM
Perfect imagery in this lovely entry Faye. It is sure to do well!
A. Sharma Avatar
November 22, 2014 at 3:12 AM
Brilliant write Faye! Sure to do well in contest! Best wishes!
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 21, 2014 at 7:25 PM
Nice Faye. I hope you do well in the contest.
Lawless Avatar
November 21, 2014 at 6:43 PM
oh, nicely done Faye. Simple and sibilant.
Allison Avatar
November 21, 2014 at 5:18 PM
wonderful imagery Faye - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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