Frozen In Crystaline - 4

Another superb, profound crystalline poem.

Excellent poem, Maurice. I don't have a clue about contests, but I guess congrats are in order. Very good write though. Love and peace, my friend.

I love your interpretation of the picture, Maurice...very beautiful and peaceful, not an ending but a beginning! Congrats to you!! Hugs, Rhonda

MAURICE, Congratulations with your awesome "Frozen In Crystalline" win. ~SKAT~

here again to send you my sweet congrats, Maurice!

Hi Maurice, wow...your poem gave me goosebumps! The picture and your verbal image are one! Congratulations on your well-deserved win! Sandra

back with congrats Maurice hugs

many many congrats my friend:-) Hugs jan xx

Beautifully merged are the photo and your mood created Maurice...thank you so much for your comments on mine as well..much appreciated

Life's celestial final walk, it is! Why you wanna amend it? That's what I thought too. Very nicely written. I love it.

A sad one, congratulations.

Congrats on your winning entry..There were some very creative works on the list..Such a talented group of writers gathered at this soup pot....Sara

Congrats on a fine win Maurice..

Congrats on the win Maurice,your words glitter...huggs

Love the two words pearly and pristine together, Maurice. Your words capture the essence of the picture. I am most curious about this "final reading!" Congrats in my contest and thanks so much for supporting it.

Excellent crystalline, Maurice. Your final reading must be where that light is far away...long way to go yet! // paul

many years left in you yet Maurice wonderful rendition gl in contest hugs

You captured the image to perfection Maurice great alliteration and a fabulous final line - good luck in the contest my friend:-) hugs jan xxx 7+fave

Love the alliteration in the first line..As a whole it is amazing.

This crystalline goes perfectly with the pic. Andrea is going to love it.

So beautiful is this crystalline Maurice! Gl in contest!

For some reason Frank Sinatra's song my way won't get out of my head. Maybe final reading verses final curtain. Well done Crystalline Maurice. Good luck in the contest.

Wow, a punch at the end!! What a great way to add drama to at frozen picture -- it adds major heat . . . so many questions . . . what does he mean . . . you are a master at bringing in the reader, opening the door of our imagination and then stepping back. Well done my good friend.

amazing word choice, maurice.. the second line packs a sweet, frosty wallop... i can see this on the winners' page.. huggs