Frozen Breath

Snow falls silently
Painting a blanket of white
Breath can now be seen



Winter
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
June 21, 2010 at 5:45 AM
Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's contest "Seasons Senryu" Larry. Love, Carol
Cwiak Avatar
June 20, 2010 at 9:05 PM
Great write for a Winter Senryu! Congrats on your win! Dan C
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June 19, 2010 at 1:28 PM
Nice use of imagery. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Linda-Marie's contest. Enjoy your success. Keep that pen flowing. Karen
Dietrich Avatar
June 18, 2010 at 8:33 AM
hmmm, like Rueben, I think it's a fav!
Dietrich Avatar
June 18, 2010 at 8:33 AM
This was very nice indeed. Breathing in that fresh air! Congratulations! Luv, andrea
Sweetheart Avatar
June 16, 2010 at 8:50 PM
Congrats Larry on your success in my contest ..with this wonderful write.. also appreciate your support of my contests.. with luv.. "Sweetheart"
K. Avatar
June 16, 2010 at 9:19 AM
loved your title Larry, :) and the imagery you've expressed here is just beautiful :) thanks for all your comments --nikko :)
Taylor Avatar
June 15, 2010 at 4:09 PM
Outstanding. Great write.
Tideswell Avatar
June 15, 2010 at 1:00 PM
Pure and simple, beautiful imagery ~ Sharon :)
Murphy Avatar
June 15, 2010 at 10:49 AM
very nice if for contest good luck well done faleshia
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