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Frozen Breath

Snow falls silently Painting a blanket of white Breath can now be seen Winter

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Date: 6/21/2010 5:45:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's contest "Seasons Senryu" Larry. Love, Carol

Date: 6/20/2010 9:05:00 PM

Great write for a Winter Senryu! Congrats on your win! Dan C

Date: 6/19/2010 1:28:00 PM

Nice use of imagery. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Linda-Marie's contest. Enjoy your success. Keep that pen flowing. Karen

Date: 6/18/2010 8:33:00 AM

This was very nice indeed. Breathing in that fresh air! Congratulations! Luv, andrea

Date: 6/18/2010 8:33:00 AM

hmmm, like Rueben, I think it's a fav!

Date: 6/16/2010 8:50:00 PM

Congrats Larry on your success in my contest ..with this wonderful write.. also appreciate your support of my contests.. with luv.. "Sweetheart"

Date: 6/16/2010 9:19:00 AM

loved your title Larry, :) and the imagery you've expressed here is just beautiful :) thanks for all your comments --nikko :)

Date: 6/15/2010 4:09:00 PM

Outstanding. Great write.

Date: 6/15/2010 1:00:00 PM

Pure and simple, beautiful imagery ~ Sharon :)

Date: 6/15/2010 10:49:00 AM

very nice if for contest good luck well done faleshia