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'frozen'

I see your mouth move I studied your jumbled words still my mind frozen *my weird way of venting* 060620111205

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Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 7/30/2011 3:04:00 PM

ok, whoops! I think I was thinking of a different write?? Wrong popsicle! Heehee! Wow! this is so enlightening! Love the way you vent ^_^! Awesome write, missy :D Can't you put a dedication here to this vention of yours? kidding :D

Wilma Neels
Date: 8/7/2011 3:13:00 PM

you want to get me into trouble hey?? ?mwahugs?

Kabuteng P.Ink K.
Date: 7/30/2011 3:05:00 PM

mwahugs!! haha

Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 6/16/2011 4:56:00 AM

Yes...sometimes some people don't make much sense, do they? Witty and very true!

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 6/10/2011 10:21:00 AM

Ahhhh If I had a dollar for everytime I felt this way I would have made a bridge from me to you and we can meet in the middle for coffee and , well I will leave the rest blank lol.... just playing... love Micael

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 6/8/2011 6:08:00 PM

Shock city . Effective Senryu, Wilma.

Jack Horne

Date: 6/8/2011 12:17:00 PM

LOL, I love your 'weird way of venting' : )

Kash Poet

Date: 6/7/2011 11:12:00 PM

Very witty write here Wilma.Are u not commenting these days?

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/7/2011 8:51:00 AM

intense depiction of one love trying to figure out another love.. great description Wilma ..of this plight..luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/6/2011 9:54:00 PM

I think that person must have been very confusing. GOOD way of venting, Wilma!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/6/2011 6:30:00 PM

Hahaha, what an intellectual humorous write, Wilma, a class by itself

James Foulk

Date: 6/6/2011 11:00:00 AM

enjoyed this one, well written.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/6/2011 10:09:00 AM

Can relate to this feeling, Wilma. Sometimes words just don't make sense in certain circumstances. Well said! Cyndi suggested I try to lure Brad Pitt by taking my top off. Can see him running away in horror now. Still waiting to see if the National Imaging Board will approve the MRI scheduled for tomorrow. Last minute frustration. Love, Carolyn