'frozen'

I see your mouth move
I studied your jumbled words
still my mind frozen


*my weird way of venting*


060620111205

on writing and wordssenryu

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Kabuteng P.Ink K.

July 30, 2011 at 3:04 PM

ok, whoops! I think I was thinking of a different write?? Wrong popsicle! Heehee! Wow! this is so enlightening! Love the way you vent ^_^! Awesome write, missy :D Can't you put a dedication here to this vention of yours? kidding :D

Wilma Neels

August 7, 2011 at 3:13 PM

you want to get me into trouble hey?? ?mwahugs?

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

July 30, 2011 at 3:05 PM

mwahugs!! haha

Zzzzz Zzzzz

June 16, 2011 at 4:56 AM

Yes...sometimes some people don't make much sense, do they? Witty and very true!

Michael J. Falotico

June 10, 2011 at 10:21 AM

Ahhhh If I had a dollar for everytime I felt this way I would have made a bridge from me to you and we can meet in the middle for coffee and , well I will leave the rest blank lol.... just playing... love Micael

Robert A. Dufresne

June 8, 2011 at 6:08 PM

Shock city . Effective Senryu, Wilma.

Jack Horne

June 8, 2011 at 12:17 PM

LOL, I love your 'weird way of venting' : )

Kash Poet

June 7, 2011 at 11:12 PM

Very witty write here Wilma.Are u not commenting these days?

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

June 7, 2011 at 8:51 AM

intense depiction of one love trying to figure out another love.. great description Wilma ..of this plight..luv..

Andrea Dietrich

June 6, 2011 at 9:54 PM

I think that person must have been very confusing. GOOD way of venting, Wilma!

Dr.Ram Mehta

June 6, 2011 at 6:30 PM

Hahaha, what an intellectual humorous write, Wilma, a class by itself

James Foulk

June 6, 2011 at 11:00 AM

enjoyed this one, well written.

Carolyn Devonshire

June 6, 2011 at 10:09 AM

Can relate to this feeling, Wilma. Sometimes words just don't make sense in certain circumstances. Well said! Cyndi suggested I try to lure Brad Pitt by taking my top off. Can see him running away in horror now. Still waiting to see if the National Imaging Board will approve the MRI scheduled for tomorrow. Last minute frustration. Love, Carolyn

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