Frozen

Town in frosty grip Stand still of nature on ice Ducks play hide and seek

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Daver Austin

Date: 1/27/2010 8:43:00 AM

Salutations from frozen Michigan. This little haiku is marvelous, fits my mood. Love, daver

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/27/2010 7:03:00 AM

What a picture you painted here with your words Gert. I can see it all. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/27/2010 7:01:00 AM

I was reading Lena's comment. I too liked the playful nature of this one contrasted with the wintery lines. Where are YOU from, Gert? Probably you already said, but I can't keep everyone's bios around here straight!! HOpe your cold is gone? Andrea

Lena Townsend

Date: 1/27/2010 6:07:00 AM

I like the playful nature of this Haiku. I feel for those little ducks. I am anxious for the warmth of spring as I am sure they are. Thanks for sharing this well penned write. Smiles from Lolita

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 1/27/2010 4:16:00 AM

Hi Gert... I'll bet those ducks do play hide and seek. I can see them now... running for cover to get out of the cold. It has been a COLD winter around the world this year... I hope the next Ice Age isn't approaching too fast. Well, It might help balance out the Global Warming... I guess we better enjoy what we have while we have it... I definitely don't want to end up like the dinosaurs. Thanks for the fun that I had with your Haiku this morning... Smiling, Dane

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/27/2010 4:07:00 AM

Nice Haiku to remind me how cold and cause me to wonder how can those animals stand it. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara