frosty winter


                                        crazy biting wind

                                lush green valley grows hazy ~
   
                                       squirrel turns lazy




PLACE : 3rd
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Kendrick Avatar
December 29, 2023 at 4:36 AM
Way to go with this winter winner in Tania's contest. Congratulations to you. Thank you for sharing it with us. Sara K
Dietrich Avatar
December 25, 2023 at 11:45 AM
Oh so cute adding in the rhyming squirrel word
Venkata Ramana Avatar
December 25, 2023 at 11:25 PM
Thank you so much for the compliments.
Kitchin Avatar
December 24, 2023 at 1:03 PM
Patri, congratulations on your winning placement with your sweet haiku!
Venkata Ramana Avatar
December 25, 2023 at 4:06 AM
Thank you so much for the compliments.
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