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Frosty Morning

frosty morning the stone seats by the beach empty

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/15/2011 2:49:00 PM

This one is really nicely done, Eiken. Quite haiku-ish!

Charles Henderson

Date: 12/29/2010 9:13:00 PM

Very very nice. I like the way you can change your cut position, from poem to poem.

Audrey Haick

Date: 12/29/2010 6:07:00 PM

Again, love the picture you've painted....cold empty "stone" seats on the beach in winter! Always, Audrey

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/29/2010 12:52:00 PM

What I meant is traditional haiku is of 17 syllables. It's a mere suggestion. You may write anyway you feel free. Eiken

Carol Fillmore

Date: 12/29/2010 7:52:00 AM

excellent imagery here! Thanks so much for your comment on my winter haiku...much appreciated:)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/29/2010 4:46:00 AM

Back to answer your question Eiken. You can communicate with poets by SoupMail. Beside a poets name you will see a envelope and a soupbowl. You click on that to send them SoupMail. If you look to the left side of page in Member area you will see My Soup Mail click there to read your mail sent from others. Also forms of poetry are toward the bottom in the Resources section. This will help you understand the forms and see some examples. Wishing you the best always, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/29/2010 4:35:00 AM

May I ask to give once over to the syllable counts in your haiku, Eiken

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/29/2010 3:44:00 AM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Eiken. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also. Wishing you a Happy New Year. Love, Carol