Sotto Poet Poet Haiku

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Frosty Mixology

Written: August 25, 2023
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Whispering snowflakes
Slowly form a cocktail dance~
With winter's embrace

The lonely heartbeat
Ebbs to nothing in the cold~
Silence claims its toll.

Lost in darkened skies
They say look, sun will come one day~
But pain lingers on 

In shadows, I dwell
Vines of sorrow grip my heart~
Stars weep in despair

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Sara Kendrick August 26, 2023 at 6:56 AM Such a sad one. The lines drip with heartache. You have captured the emotion very well. Excellent creativity and emotion portrayed. Sara

Hiya Sharma August 26, 2023 at 4:10 AM Such a melancholic piece, hued with grieving shades and sombre soliloquy, when we revolve in spirals searching for light, only to be succumbed by the eternity of shadows and darkness and pain continues to live on. "Whispering snowflakes", "The lonely heartbeat ebbs to nothing in the cold", " Vines of sorrow grip my heart, stars weep in despair " Love the descriptions and imagery here, so profound and deep..

Anne-Lise Andresen August 25, 2023 at 12:48 PM - Beautiful winter image with a melancholic mood, Las - hugs