Frosting on Friendship

Don’t smear birthday cake; a small slice will do. It’s a treat to show honor. Don’t waste away, honey!

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Paige Hind

Date: 4/8/2025 11:07:00 PM

Kind advice! <3 :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/9/2025 1:33:00 PM

Thanks…have a slice of life! :)

Joe Maverick

Date: 4/5/2025 9:28:00 AM

Well I'm not one to waste Kim, really enjoyed The offer within this kimos taste.'

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/5/2025 2:51:00 PM

:) smiles

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/2/2025 10:00:00 PM

'The frosting on the cake' has things backward, eh?

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/3/2025 5:51:00 AM

“No cake for me,” a selfish thing when a birthday is to be celebrated, with little exception.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/2/2025 1:00:00 PM

Loved the last line . I only like a little cake with my frosting!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/2/2025 1:26:00 PM

LOL! Must be the end piece…I’ll fight you for it ;)

Yann Rolland

Date: 4/1/2025 7:08:00 PM

remarkable allegory, will think about friendship that way bravo poet

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/1/2025 8:15:00 PM

Thank you, dear friend!