Frosting on Friendship

Don’t smear birthday cake; a small slice will do.
        It’s a treat to show honor.
   Don’t waste away, honey!
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Hind Avatar
April 8, 2025 at 11:07 PM
Kind advice! <3 :)
Rodrigues Avatar
April 9, 2025 at 1:33 PM
Thanks…have a slice of life! :)
Maverick Avatar
April 5, 2025 at 9:28 AM
Well I'm not one to waste Kim, really enjoyed The offer within this kimos taste.'
Rodrigues Avatar
April 5, 2025 at 2:51 PM
:) smiles
Wolf Avatar
April 2, 2025 at 10:00 PM
'The frosting on the cake' has things backward, eh?
Rodrigues Avatar
April 3, 2025 at 5:51 AM
“No cake for me,” a selfish thing when a birthday is to be celebrated, with little exception.
Dietrich Avatar
April 2, 2025 at 1:00 PM
Loved the last line . I only like a little cake with my frosting!
Rodrigues Avatar
April 2, 2025 at 1:26 PM
LOL! Must be the end piece…I’ll fight you for it ;)
Rolland Avatar
April 1, 2025 at 7:08 PM
remarkable allegory, will think about friendship that way bravo poet
Rodrigues Avatar
April 1, 2025 at 8:15 PM
Thank you, dear friend!
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