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Frosted Heart

You shattered my heart into pieces, They scattered around, as time ceases, Now tattered memories left behind, What mattered has vanished from my mind, My battered soul now dreams of love lost, Thoughts spattered as heart's covered with frost!
4th Jan 2023 For Line Gauthier's "Bite size poem no. 58" contest

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Date: 1/14/2023 8:46:00 PM
A painful place to be. It flows nicely Jo :)
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Date: 1/4/2023 2:31:00 PM
Well written Jo! Excellent :)
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Date: 1/4/2023 10:37:00 AM
Broken heart so painful. Like the last line. Thoughts spattered as heart's covered with frost! May your year be full of blessings.
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Date: 1/4/2023 7:54:00 AM
Written as poignantly as real life, with tremendous expressiveness and feeling, Jo. Clear and concise.
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Date: 1/4/2023 7:39:00 AM
Lovely - extra nice touch with inner rhymes :)
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Date: 1/4/2023 6:34:00 AM
Poignant as real life--wonderfully expressive, emotive write, Jo. Succinctly delivered. Best to you.
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