Joanna Daniel Poet Rhyme

Frosted Heart

You shattered my heart into pieces, 

They scattered around, as time ceases, 

Now tattered memories left behind, 

What mattered has vanished from my mind, 

My battered soul now dreams of love lost, 

Thoughts spattered as heart's covered with frost! 



4th Jan 2023

For Line Gauthier's "Bite size poem no. 58" contest

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FJ Thomas January 14, 2023 at 8:46 PM A painful place to be. It flows nicely Jo :)

Heidi Sands January 4, 2023 at 2:31 PM Well written Jo! Excellent :)

Eve Roper January 4, 2023 at 10:37 AM Broken heart so painful. Like the last line. Thoughts spattered as heart's covered with frost! May your year be full of blessings.

Sotto Poet January 4, 2023 at 7:54 AM Written as poignantly as real life, with tremendous expressiveness and feeling, Jo. Clear and concise.

Susan Woodrow January 4, 2023 at 7:39 AM Lovely - extra nice touch with inner rhymes :)

Vijay Pandit January 4, 2023 at 6:34 AM Poignant as real life--wonderfully expressive, emotive write, Jo. Succinctly delivered. Best to you.