Frost Crystals

brumous air transforms into glistening jewels – minus twenty-one

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Mug Bug

Date: 2/24/2023 11:48:00 AM

Ah I do love the cold. But -21 has a different feel. Very beautiful haiku. ^-^

Elizabeth Feeley
Date: 2/27/2023 1:01:00 PM

Thank you for the encouragement. We have had a prolonged cold period with temperatures dropping down to below -20 before looking at the wind chill factor. Beyond nippy. It is supposed to break by the end of the week. I have decided against long walks at this time...maybe in a couple of weeks!

Daniel Turner

Date: 2/24/2023 5:07:00 AM

A nice haiku Elizabeth but too cold for me:)

Elizabeth Feeley
Date: 2/24/2023 5:18:00 AM

Thanks Daniel, it has warmed up to minus twenty Celsius, cold yes, but the frost designs are incredible. Keep warm. Spring's coming...