Frost Crystals

brumous air transforms
into glistening jewels –
minus twenty-one
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Bug Avatar
February 24, 2023 at 11:48 AM
Ah I do love the cold. But -21 has a different feel. Very beautiful haiku. ^-^
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February 27, 2023 at 1:01 PM
Thank you for the encouragement. We have had a prolonged cold period with temperatures dropping down to below -20 before looking at the wind chill factor. Beyond nippy. It is supposed to break by the end of the week. I have decided against long walks at this time...maybe in a couple of weeks!
Turner Avatar
February 24, 2023 at 5:07 AM
A nice haiku Elizabeth but too cold for me:)
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February 24, 2023 at 5:18 AM
Thanks Daniel, it has warmed up to minus twenty Celsius, cold yes, but the frost designs are incredible. Keep warm. Spring's coming...
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