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Front Yard Paradise

ruptured water main water, ice everywhere.... front yard paradise © 14 Dec 2010 Charles Henderson

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/17/2011 5:07:00 PM

ice ice baby!!! we sure had our fill of this, this winter. Light & Love

John Freeman

Date: 1/22/2011 9:57:00 PM

A belated on your win Charles,"Congratulations!" Just checking out some of your Haiku. I think I can see all the ingredient! Quite a visual final line. Smile. Agape, Moses

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/2/2011 12:12:00 AM

charles, checking out one of your haiku. I think you acheived a great final line with this. I can visualize it! Luv, Andrea

Date: 12/27/2010 3:23:00 PM

Interesting perception. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us. Keep on writing. Happy New Year! Karen

Kash Poet

Date: 12/17/2010 11:19:00 AM

Congrats Charles on this well deserved win.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/17/2010 8:30:00 AM

ongratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of Rick, Charles

Carrie Richards

Date: 12/17/2010 8:25:00 AM

I can picture this 'disaster' that turned into a blessing! Great imagination, Charles! ~ Carrie

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/17/2010 8:02:00 AM

My ice skates are in my car, but I'll need your address. Awesome haiku, Charles. To me this would indeed by a "front yard paradise." Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/17/2010 7:28:00 AM

Congrats Charles on your big win in Rick's contest with this exciting entry on flowing water.. enjoy my friend with luv...

Rick Parise

Date: 12/16/2010 10:00:00 PM

Congrats on your win Charles!!!!!!!very nice~Great Imagery!!!~God bless ~rick

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/16/2010 9:58:00 PM

This is quite a picture, Charles!! Congrats on your awesome win. LUv, Andrea

Charles Henderson

Date: 12/16/2010 9:57:00 AM

Hey guys, you misunderstood. This was the house across the street.

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/16/2010 6:35:00 AM

interesting aspect here Charles, does one need his skates? enjoyed Harry

Deb Radke

Date: 12/16/2010 4:23:00 AM

Yes. I can see this one. 'Paradise' as in the mind of the beholder, wouldn't you say. I would like to think a sea of water in my front yard would be paradise... Very good writing, and thank you for giving me one that gave me pause as to how I would survey a frozen plethora of ice from a broken main in my house in the midst of winter...

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/15/2010 7:14:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your heart with us through your poetry here at PoetrySoup Charles. My time for reading and commenting will be short until after the New Year. So, today I send a wish from my house to yours. Have a Joyous Holiday and a Happy New Year. Please remember the sick and hungry in your prayers daily. Do all you can to help in anyway you can. Love and blessing, Carol and Family (Your smile can warm a heart)