Sue Mason Poet Diamante

From There To Here ..... (Diamente)

Hell
             drunk, destitute
          falling, crying, dying
    Devil, Monster, Warrior, Woman
     standing, laughing, recovering,
              sober, serene
                   Heaven

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February 6, 2009 at 12:09 PM Powerful way to show the struggle. Good use of this challenging form. Keep on writing! Thank you for taking time to comment on my poem. Have a nice day. Karen

Vince Suzadail Jr. February 4, 2009 at 11:37 AM Way to go!!!!!!!!!! Vince

Kimmy Holmes February 2, 2009 at 7:54 PM Are we related??? Love Kim

Sharon Winter January 26, 2009 at 5:29 AM Sue, you are experimenting with all forms and succeeding greatly! This is so wonderful to read. The writing and YOU are both extremely inspiring. Love, Shar

Kristin Reynolds January 26, 2009 at 3:50 AM Rock on you brave and wonderfully strong lady, good for you. :) I mean that, right on. I have seen forst hand the internal dying fom booze. love, Kristin

Donald Cauthon January 25, 2009 at 9:58 PM Nice little journey there, hope all is well

Corinne Curcio January 25, 2009 at 4:39 PM Very powerful writing Sue. Perfect title and two ends of a spectrum achieved in so few words - and done so well.

Raul Moreno January 25, 2009 at 2:38 PM Nice work Sue, as always your work is touching...Raul

Lucinda Bulger January 25, 2009 at 2:23 PM interesting format that is wisely used to convey a message. (truthfully I don't believe I have seen this format before):) Nice one!